K-Trini vs SPuL aka Reckless
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 KO
4-1 Loss

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-05-05 at 10:37 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

SPuL aka Reckless has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 10:39 PM.

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 10:50 PM.

The Best thing for you,is that you die,and I abolish all the clues
Only time you'd shine on stage wit me,is when ya polish my shoes
You winning?,hell no,ya couldn't eclipse me,if ya battled me
With bags of E-cstacy firmly stapled onto each of ur knees*
Squeezing ya tongue while spittin's only time ya rhyme-tight
You could eat bright lemons,but still wouldn't be in the lime-light
The day you kill everyone is the day nutin's worth more than you
So Change ya name,fix ya sig,and hop of Jack the Ripper's balls too

*Eclipse
E=ectsay
clipse=clips(staples)

DON"T UNDERSTAND............THEN DON'T VOTE

Look at this.......you wanted the battle........yet takin so long to post ur shit.

Trini? Who are you? To me, you're jus another stranger
I mean who the fuck names themself after the yellow power ranger?
Seriously, talkin' shit, man, you went and made me mad
By the way I'm gonna "son" you you should call me "Trini's dad"
My flow is hot like chemo therapy, so you go and figure
I'll eave you bald, lmao, like Charles Barkely nigga

Your closer ain't dope. Man, what the fuck you drinking?
It only signifies the place where you got tired of thinking

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...408&postcount=8
^^^^^^^^^That power ranger line biten off 9th degree.....

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...054&postcount=6
^^^^and that son/trini's dad line bitten of Jack the ripper........

I might report you later spul...................I'm just high right now.............

^actually that isn't biting. lmao..... and power ranger line is same concept you jackass. And I had it thought up way before 9th, I can show proof, when I said "Isn't Trini the yellow power ranger?" wit my alias Marshall Mathers. so stfu... lmao.....

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

.......lol good battle here man nice like spul's opener......lol but yea spuld ur verse was good nice punches and structure was good as well but u can also use some work on the vocab and k-trini u had ur punches and lines that were good but wasnt packin enuff as spuls work on yo delivery so tha punch can pack more u kno so good battle and just keep at it aight both did good but my v// goes to spul

This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
 

ahahahhahahahahah sick battleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
 

is this really spul lmao.............................................. .......

This was feedback posted for K-Trini
 

Squeezing ya tongue while spittin's only time ya rhyme-tight
You could eat bright lemons,but still wouldn't be in the lime-light

^ That was dumb.

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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

nice battle
Spul, im loving that opener, good shit there, nice personal. for the majority of the verse, i though trini had punches that were a little bit harder (that barkly line was kinda weak) but spul had better wordplay and and his shit rhymed tighter. maybe you did squeez his tounge, lol. also, his closer was alot better.
trini, your verse was ok, but your wordplay was kinda played out, nothin original. your opener was played, that second bar was probly thr best, but that closer was weak. i jut hope you come harder than that when you try to battle me.
much respect to both
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