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Indeph 07-02-05 11:35 PM

"Air Waves"-Indeph
 
I went on some battle MC,Mixtape Indeph type shit here so read it all
I wanna see how I'm doin with this style.I toned it down vocab wise
but upped the metas and punches and flow too. hope you like.

PLEASE DON'T BITE,THATS WHY I HAVEN'T DROPPED IN A WHILE




Air Waves
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I'm not huffin not puffin just because of fame
cause tommorow on the front page,is another face.
and plus it isn't fair they don't wanna fuckin play
the real rap.......just let the air waves,sufficate/
(repeat x2)

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Nobody else got flow to make the air convert.
you agree,you not sure,but can't bear to search
I'm not embarassed of my grades,nor scared of work.
But radio air is 1st, you can't compare the worth
I never yapped for fun,rap just has to come
before class or a game,I'ma practice puns.
I gotta track to run,I need an early lift.
I don't want my 3rd record when I'm thirty six
But when niggas battle me,they remember the pain
like you remember them prewritten lyrics you made
and the fact that I'm aware,got you fearin ya fate.
the crystal says your death's an uncurable day.
If the Game aint owned,by tommorow be scared.
cause that was 2 days ago nigga I'm already there.
bars without my mind, is like a barber and hair.
without my musical vibe,your ears is harnestin air
___________________________________________

I'm not huffin not puffin just because of fame
cause tommorow on the front page,is another face.
and plus it isn't fair they don't wanna fuckin play
the real rap.......just let the air waves,sufficate/
(repeat x2)

___________________________________________

With low self esteem,I pulled hoes with pure interest
You pull hoes,you lure women,a sure difference.
through these years I sure did mature in it.....
distinguish which is it on the lip that you're kissin.
I grew up on music,so I naturally top it.
I don't sell nicks,so I gotta nack for these topics.
all these battle MC's stop bragging you hot shit.
my mouth droppin,I'm baffled you actually got hits.
I'm growin suspicious,that you know I'm the best.
but you can't say it,cause then I'd grow in success.
and that can't happen,if I blow on a rec.
then that means the history book' could close on the rest.
and that'll break your little heart,I'll sew up your chest.
and tell you again and re open your death, its a motion effect.
Niggas on cloud nine when they rhymin with me.
but when you run outa bars niggas sigh in relief.
your skill sensors for you are unbiased indeed
I get the crowd hyper,you puttin the tired to sleep.
I aint the type to ever wanna go retire in peace.
I'm the guy to go to a fire to admire the scene
______________________________________________

I'm not huffin not puffin just because of fame
cause tommorow on the front page,is another face.
and plus it isn't fair they don't wanna fuckin play
the real rap.......just let the air waves,sufficate/
(repeat x2)

___________________________________________

my family looks at me like a hideous man.
Before you go tell me I'm wrong,just give me a chance.
How can you say I'ma fall and not lend me a hand.
You're no better then the nigga who had hit me and ran
If words was measured in muscles,I'm buffer then you.
You keeps it hood,but the shit you say is nothin but fluke.
I can't say everything that I've muttered is true.
but I did everything in battles,well...other then lose.
the white flag wrapped around, just to show that I'm nuetral.
but don't front,you never know a lone soldier can bruise you.
no blades no guns so no I won't shoot you.,
but don't wait,don't come closer,so I can nuke you......shit
according to these,mothafuckas I'ma weak brother.
I aint street just because I aint a G lover?
I've seen gangstas reach covers when they see colors.
of the enemy and run away and go and scream mother.
I have never touched guns,But I'll like to man.
but fuck that,the war was won with my two hands

Indeph 07-02-05 11:45 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195271

MADDRAPPER 07-03-05 12:18 AM

the truth is spoken now your roof broken and now leaks hoping this freak// patch it up I close the hatch on a corrupt chump so good luck chump// I doubt you man because you're out of a plan for rhymes//

Indeph 07-03-05 12:20 AM

man I fuckin hate you.

..ADLIB.. 07-03-05 12:31 AM

Firstly man who say's you gotta have big vocab to blow this shit? Slim Shady rips harder then any other mainstream rapper and he doesnt have as big of a vocab as lot's of other 'dope' rappers. Yeh man so who cares as long as it's good it doesn't have to have crazy language to be good. :thumbup:

Alright man you started off in your first verse slow but the second was dope and then the third was just as dope or better.
There were a few lines that stood out, you were pretty consistant, I don't want to leave toy feed dude like most of these cat's bullshit a lot in feed.
I liked these lines....

all these battle MC's stop bragging you hot shit.
my mouth droppin,I'm baffled you actually got hits.
I'm growin suspicious,that you know I'm the best.
but you can't say it,cause then I'd grow in success.

the white flag wrapped around, just to show that I'm nuetral.
but don't front,you never know a lone soldier can bruise you.
no blades no guns so no I won't shoot you.,
but don't wait,don't come closer,so I can nuke you......shit

Nice shit man...I'm out, Peace.

Indeph 07-03-05 05:36 PM

thanks for the feed.

Indeph 07-03-05 07:36 PM

up up up up up.

Indeph 07-03-05 10:29 PM

up up up up up.

Ex-Haust 07-03-05 10:36 PM

this was pretty dope.. multies was nice.. i like how you centered it.. made it flow.. ( dont make jokes ) vocabulary was killing em..

Indeph 07-04-05 02:52 AM

up up up up up.

Indeph 07-04-05 07:48 PM

up up up up up.

Indeph 07-04-05 09:00 PM

up up up up up.

Indeph 07-04-05 10:22 PM

OMFG peep my shit what the fuck is wrong with you people.

..ADLIB.. 07-05-05 05:30 AM

dude no1 peeps shit here.

Indeph 07-05-05 06:25 PM

yeah I know but still....:bored:


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