Black_Heart vs lyrickz
 

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BLaCK_HEaRT has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 07:58 PM.

lyrickz has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 08:00 PM.

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You couldn't have hot bars even if you was in a africa Jail "Cell All Night"//
You can't tell this guy dosen't have lyrics he couldn't even "spell it right"//(Lyrickz)

Fake ass vocabulary, for this battle "Save The Grammar"//
I'll leave a cut on his face longer than the goatee on "David-Banner"//

When ya bitch top off, she fear-ful of sins, but still a "Dumb-Hoe"//
You a 6-0-1 Repsenta 6 Losses, 0 Wins, and "One-No-Show"//

I'm the answer but i ain't playing ball and make "Cheddar-in-Philly"//
I'll leave more bullet holes in your face, than the # of "Letters in Mississippi"//

If i'm i go to your job, i'm taking ya work "You Ain't Making Pay Then"//
You from jack town ??? It must mean yall "Masterbate-Men"//

No Fighting Friends, Slugs as big as Heinkens, GET YA WEIGHT UP "Like you Diet-in"//
Have ya crew steady dyin when, ya hood i'm drivin in You couldn't dodge it if you had the "spidy sense"//

Put it to your dome, YA KNOW ... imma let the "Chrome-Bake"//
To your "Bones-Break" and leave in the river of your "home state"//(MISSISSIPPI)

Is it Generic, that your family can't "spit lyrics"//
Have FEAR PRICK, even deaf cliccs can't still "Hear-This"//
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EXPLANATIONs

You couldn't have hot bars even if you was in a africa Jail "Cell All Night"//{a Jail cell has bars, and you know africa is hot.. and you know rap bars}
You can't tell this guy dosen't have lyrics he couldn't even "spell it right"//(Lyrickz){Self explantiontary .. his name Lyrickz .. LYRICS}

Fake ass vocabulary, for this battle "Save The Grammar"//{He told me he has the best vocab on the site}
I'll leave a cut on his face longer than the goatee on "David-Banner"//{David put mississppi on the rap map, and David has the longest goate almost down to his nipple}

When ya bitch top off, she fear-ful of sins, but still a "Dumb-Hoe"//{Just talking bout his slut}
You a 6-0-1 Repsenta 6 Losses, 0 Wins, and "One-No-Show"//{6-0-1 in sig as his area code 6(losses)-0(Wins)1-(No Show)}

I'm the answer but i ain't playing ball and make "Cheddar-in-Philly"//{u know a.i play b-ball for philly 76ers and is the most paid on da roster}
I'll leave more bullet holes in your face, than the # of "Letters in Mississippi"//{he from m-i-s-s-i-s-s-i-p-p-i DATS 11 HOLES IN YA FACE}

If i'm i go to your job, i'm taking ya work "You Ain't Making Pay Then"//{im a HUSTLa ill take ya job like ya bitch}
You from jack town ??? It must mean yall "Masterbate-Men"//{He from jackson mississippi aka jack-town .. so jack off bka masterbating}

No Fighting Friends, Slugs as big as Heinkens, GET YA WEIGHT UP "Like you Diet-in"//{alot of killa mulis..you know heinkens are big, slugs = bullets he ain't working hard in dis game so he need to get his weight up}
Have ya crew steady dyin when, ya hood i'm drivin in You couldn't dodge it if you had the "spidy sense"// { he has spider man as his avy.. and you know spidy doges bullets with his spidy sense"}

Put it to your dome, YA KNOW ... imma let the "Chrome-Bake"//
To your "Bones-Break" and leave in the river of your "home state"//(MISSISSIPPI){you know one of da biggest rivers}

Is it Generic, that your family can't "spit lyrics"//{Generic = runs in ya famz }
Have FEAR PRICK, even deaf cliccs can't still "Hear-This"//{Deaf can't hear..but i'm so ill dey can't}

Wanna be thug, i'll leave this fake crip crippled/
you poppin off slugs,me and my niggas launching missiles/
trying to be hard, showcasing blue and black images(in his sig)/
you're pride will be scarred; leave u with black and blue blemishes/
you aint ready-to-flow, u like a ho....always ready-to-blow/
i'll chop u up and toss u up like confetti-to-throw/
wanna be street sergent, you just a bad-soulja'/
like Catholics at lent, this nigga gets passed-over/
like atheists-turned preachers, (i'll) make black a believer/
give u this holy ghost, well actually, its just a seizure/
cuz once i seize-ya, all of your worldly hope will leave-ya/
(you'll) wake up from ya coma, probably swearing you spoke-with-jesus/

quote:"Fake ass vocabulary, for this battle "Save The Grammar"//{He told me he has the best vocab on the site}"

what?????
i just got on this site dawg

Let's Get Some Votes In This Bitch! So Wuts Craccin ..uppin Dis Topic

uppin.........................

Voted For: lyrickz

Yo, I'mma have to go with lyrickz in this one. Lyrick zhad a few decent punches.

wanna be street sergent, you just a bad-soulja'/
like Catholics at lent, this nigga gets passed-over/

Black, I wasn't really feelin ya flow, u kinda over did tha Missippi thing. Yeah, it woulda been cool once...maybe twice, but u gotta play of otha stuff. Ya structure was kinda fucked...and I wasn't really feelin any of ya punches....

Sooo....vote goes to Lyrickz

quote:"cuz once i seize-ya, all of your worldly hope will leave-ya/
(you'll) wake up from ya coma, probably swearing you spoke-with-jesus/"

jus wanna say that the first line is supposed to have emphasis on the end like:"hope-will-leave-ya/......." to go with the end of the closer.

but anyway....uppin

Dats some bullshit ... but uppin this topic 4 votes..

uppin for vote........

can we get some mo' votes......

once again....upping for votes........................

This was feedback posted for lyrickz
 

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