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2Fast2Furious 07-03-05 11:50 PM

Tempt
 
Be gone, Satan, ya givin me temptations, I see it now
in front of my face is, the thing I’ve been longed after
for many many years, but I got its replacement right here.
I’m not goin to give in to your tricks, not this one
you need to see you r sick, you r gonna be tormented
Lucifer in Hell, you may not believe it, but you will
you will.

Satan...be temptin from all sides
Satan...keeps tellin me its fine
He is, the power of the Earth
He is, the corrupt and the perverse.

I got something for you Satan, an offer you can’t refuse
a battle with the one, the one who set me loose.
Oh you know about that day, when you will fight your
creator, you think your gonna win? Oh what a
faker. Give it slime, you ain’t got a chance,
God made your dumb self, now go and burn in that
stance.
Armaggedon is comin, you gonna fight a war, but
satan you need to realize what is the score.

Satan...be temptin from all sides
Satan...keeps tellin me its fine
He is, the power of the Earth
He is, the corrupt and the perverse.

God lead us from temptation, put Satan in his place
block him from my mind, from my heart I truly
praise.
The one who saved my soul, got me out of a wicked
hole,
Dark and bleak and lonely oh,
Satan got me there ya know.

Jesus, keeps me from temptation all sides
Jesus, loves me all the time
Jesus, he died for the Earth
Jesus, he’s powerful and ominous.


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Christianite 07-03-05 11:56 PM

wow, great drop, good topic, flow, structure, and vocab were really good, nice drop, keep it up

2Fast2Furious 07-03-05 11:56 PM

Thanks, uppin!!

PayDay 07-04-05 02:12 AM

yeah this was pretty tight... ure flow was on point, and like everyone else stated the topic is good... the only thing I would work on is making it longer ;)... 8/10...

.Barz Of Steel. 07-04-05 02:19 AM

I didnt read it...

Why the fuck do you structure your work like that??

2Fast2Furious 07-04-05 12:17 PM

Uppin this once more


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