Streetz vs Wes City
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 07-04-05 at 01:34 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Wes City has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-05 01:13 PM.

Like opposites of front flips ya gonna flop out
streetz got no class… like highschool dropouts
And fuck this kid……………… I got him beat
Everyone walks over him no wonder he’s street
this aint a battle of skill, man you have no talent
gotta be afraid of heights you aint up for the challenge
cant top me we all know streetz is just a rookie
and im excited….my post has never been this close pussy
this kid is really hard and got me bored like wood
and he is from the streets….of a suburban neighborhood
ill run you over and drive over your heat
im wes CITY….shit I OWN the STREETZ

Streetz has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-05 01:27 PM.

Wes admit im dope, even ur friends'll-wanna-vote-Matt/
only time u "DRAW LEAD" is when u SKETCHIN a "PENCIL" on a "NOTEPAD"/
i smoke-lads, while u tha kind ta hail-Cops, u get hit wit "SHELLS" but not tha kind a SNAILS-got/
Wes be like a "POSTMAN", tha way he delivers ojbects in "MALE'S-BOX/(mailbox, Queer)
Streetz'll Fail-not, this kids tha kind ta run his mouth where tha D's-work/(snitch ta detective's)
so ima have ta pull tha blade out, and put "3 STRIKES" down his chest, like an "Adidas" T-shirt/
ayo deze-hurt, my bullets im referin to, im leak this Punks-Hardened-Head/
tha only "SLUGS" Wes fuck wit, were in his Front-Garden-bed/(slugs=insects)
Wes could have "VIAGRA" stuck in his throat, and still not VOCAL-HARD/
someone warn Wes, when i say ima "LAY ROUNDS ON THA HOUSE" i aint talkin bout shoutin alcholic drinks at tha LOCAL-BAR...(get it?)

nice battle bruz, good luck, we uppin for votes.

Voted For: Streetz

all i hav to say is......well done streetz......but if u wanna...cum battle me to see if u tough enough to be in my crew...NO 15 minutes after check in like what wes city tried to cheat....every house rules aiiight
i'll check in asap

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i'll gotta finish off deze other battles i got on and i'll battle u sometime soon, uppin on votes here

Voted For: Streetz


Wes admit im dope, even ur friends'll-wanna-vote-Matt/
only time u "DRAW LEAD" is when u SKETCHIN a "PENCIL" on a "NOTEPAD"/
^^whack....doesn't rhyme
i smoke-lads, while u tha kind ta hail-Cops, u get hit wit "SHELLS" but not tha kind a SNAILS-got/
Wes be like a "POSTMAN", tha way he delivers ojbects in "MALE'S-BOX/(mailbox, Queer)
^^forced multis in 1st line....but nice wordplay
Streetz'll Fail-not, this kids tha kind ta run his mouth where tha D's-work/(snitch ta detective's)
so ima have ta pull tha blade out, and put "3 STRIKES" down his chest, like an "Adidas" T-shirt/
^^ight.....
ayo deze-hurt, my bullets im referin to, im leak this Punks-Hardened-Head/
tha only "SLUGS" Wes fuck wit, were in his Front-Garden-bed/(slugs=insects)
^^^played.......
Wes could have "VIAGRA" stuck in his throat, and still not VOCAL-HARD/
someone warn Wes, when i say ima "LAY ROUNDS ON THA HOUSE" i aint talkin bout shoutin alcholic drinks at tha LOCAL-BAR
^^^Nah...........this one whack

Structure your verse better.It was ugly and tough to read.Sometimes....people might not even look at your verse if it's structure bad.But you got potenial.U had some nice wordplay and shit in there.But you also had lines that didn't rhyme,forced multis,and some played concepts.

Like opposites of front flips ya gonna flop out
streetz got no class… like highschool dropouts
^^OK...
And fuck this kid……………… I got him beat
Everyone walks over him no wonder he’s street
^^Nice......
this aint a battle of skill, man you have no talent
gotta be afraid of heights you aint up for the challenge
^^Nah.......weak
cant top me we all know streetz is just a rookie
and im excited….my post has never been this close pussy
^^A lil clique and weak
this kid is really hard and got me bored like wood
and he is from the streets….of a suburban neighborhood
^^Too simplisitic
ill run you over and drive over your heat
im wes CITY….shit I OWN the STREET
^^Self glorifyed

U startd off nice with 2 nice punchlines.But then after that you fell off.U self glorified and was just to basic.U had nice structure and flow.Better than the other guy.But the reason you lost is because of punches.

Vote-Streetz
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[QUOTE=K-Trini]Voted For: Streetz


Wes admit im dope, even ur friends'll-wanna-vote-Matt/
only time u "DRAW LEAD" is when u SKETCHIN a "PENCIL" on a "NOTEPAD"/
^^whack....doesn't rhyme

i thought did straight wit that bar, how dont it ryhme? its a nice multi,
friends'll-wanna-vote-Matt
pencil on-a notepad


uppin for a KO i think.

thats not a multi kis and you did not specify 3 votes = ko and slik flo's vote is being removed for hate/no explanation.......nice try kid

shut up...just coz u lost in our battle...and i reported u so many times coz u just a hater...just watch..in 3 days u will be removed from RV for PMing people

ok keep dreaming.......................................... .....

PS........just coz hes up by 2 and u none....no y...coz u 1 rude son

This was feedback posted for Wes City
 

ill get ppl to vote guys..........................