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DQ 07-04-05 02:24 PM

Immense (3-1) vs. 1ndeph (2-1)
 
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday

No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa.

Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Drakel or Drama Queen). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extention, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be disqualified. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absense. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous.

Don't ho-show because you will be banned if you do it twice. We can understand you cannot drop due to certain circumstances but if this happens a second time, you're banned from the league for 2 weeks. If you signed up for both leagues and you no-show in one league twice, you will be banned in both leagues!

Try to limit the freeposts, we will have a chat/beef thread for that. Also give fully explained votes, if not your votes won't count!

New rule: first to get 3 votes wins by KO

Your Topic:
Unwritten Hazard

Immense 07-04-05 02:53 PM

Great...i lost the title battle...and now i gotta battle indeph....oh well...checkity check....

Indeph 07-04-05 03:29 PM

LMAO checkin in.

Indeph 07-09-05 01:03 AM

Unwritten Hazard



my blood's at a still state skins colder and through
finished with the temple I held,I've chosen to move.
but even if the reaper didn't stray closer to you.
Why isn't my own death blown over the news?
I roam the atmosphere,alone I forever tear.
If my death cry is silent it's like I was never here.
the corpse is still forced in the garbage disposel.
I departed from clothes,I'm nude and my body is totaled.
I'm 8 years old and witnessed such sinical images
at a close distance but I'm still empty with witnesses
a body decayed,unspotted but rotten for days.
the final actions my nerves took was throbben with pain.

mouth was covered with tape as I was sufferin rape.
by the father figure no comfort could come into play.
I've always wondered what spawned his hate for me.
it seems the blaim was shamed on the day we grieved.
Since moms grave became on my birthday to breath.
she took her last gasp,so maybe I should pay the free.
Father in the sophmore class,as he asked to date
the pressure for sex is,the reason that she passed away.
the wedding gown uninhabited,but now she lays
in hell with the devil,in heaven no cloud is saved.
but at least its evident of where her residence.
I forever live,on the surface where my flesh and my essense is.
I'm begging for an eye, to cross my corpse's light.
regrets of birth,a wish to have pay abortions price.


i could have sworn i dropped already...well here..

DQ 07-09-05 11:10 AM

Indeph wins by no-show but Immense signed out and even though it was after the check-in he won't get a no-show loss


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