MC:Philosopher vs slik flo
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-06-05 at 02:24 PM

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slik flo has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-05-05 02:29 PM.

MC:Philosopher has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-05-05 02:33 PM.

-Quick-One-

This Boy thinks he can step up and battle a flyweight like me
....He got another thing cummin man...he just a newbie

maybe he shud change his name to MC:Explainer
coz in about 5weeks he'll be known as MC:Complainer

if u win this(which you aint)battle..u will be crowned kool
at least if i win this...i dont act a foo'

What the point of me battlin u..which may seem(an easy task)
HEY...maybe u cud win...ye...in YOUR DREAM

I'm just wastin my time just being here
I'll win you'll see...so kiss my derriere


derriere-a french word for ass

Come on Philosopher....,..........,...........,........... ,

unlike a "cheverlete" u trying doge a "vet"(corvette)
before i fuck up you "hardware", i got a "lodge-a-text"//
to take out lames like u so now im a kidnapper
but u wouldnt be worth "50 cent" if u was a "penny raper"//
and if u want "computer" love then u came to the wrong "gate-way"
cause "stevie wonder" say u ugly thats bad when a "blind date" say//
maybe its a bad day... take some time to rest
but becoming a fake rapper is this con-quest//(con artist)
i give it to u your flows are "slik" cause they even "slipped" past u
so turn that how to rap book cause its past due//
take u out with a "shot in the arm" like a "lethal injection"
u remind me of "ben wallace" always gettin "rejections"//
with no recollection...that means you life is science fiction
but ur rhyme are on an upper floor in critical condition//

okay lets get the votes in now cause u are a cokcey dude lets see who win that will show the best person

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

yo, MC philosopher- you actually had a pretty tite verse u know, i was really feelin your verse. it flowed well, the structure was good, wasn't too basic with the vocab, im impressed.

best bars:
to take out lames like u so now im a kidnapper
but u wouldnt be worth "50 cent" if u was a "penny raper"//
that was nice.

and if u want "computer" love then u came to the wrong "gate-way"
cause "stevie wonder" say u ugly thats bad when a "blind date" say//
LOL, that was pretty dope!

the opener looks like it could've been hot, but some of the spelling was wrong, so i had to go back and check my flow on that. overall though, a pretty good verse. 7/10

Slik flo-you came pretty weak with this battle. the punches were kind of basic and simplistic throughout your verse. there wasn't any metaphors or anything, no real depth in your punchlines, elevate on that aspect of it. your flow was aight though,still went off it in a few places, but it wasn't bad, and it was structured pretty well.

best bars:
maybe he shud change his name to MC:Explainer
coz in about 5weeks he'll be known as MC:Complainer

if u win this(which you aint)battle..u will be crowned kool
at least if i win this...i dont act a foo'
^^^ i'd probably say they were your best in that verse, but they weren't that good at all really! no hate, just sayin it like i see it, and you did say it was a quick verse, so it was aight if you did it quickly. but i wasn't feelin your verse too much at all really. 4/10

no hate.
RTF on one of the battles in my sig.

thanks man im open to all help man well uppin for some votes

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

i don't really belive that it is necessary to vote on this....it is pretty obvious... Slik flo you rhyme like my lil sister....yo vocabulary is horrible...and that was the worst attempt at punches if you ask me...this battle was one sided

vote-MC PHILOSOPHER

aight uppin for some votes in here drop a link and if ill return the favor

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................................

This was feedback posted for slik flo
 

werd, nice battleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

uppin for some votes lets get some votes in here im ready to see the results of my first battle

uppin drop a link and ill repay u with an HONEST vote