i guess im a free agent seein that im new
 

unlike a "cheverlete" u trying doge a "vet"(corvette)
before i fuck up you "hardware", i got a "lodge-a-text"//
to take out lames like u so now im a kidnapper
but u wouldnt be worth "50 cent" if u was a "penny raper"//
and if u want "computer" love then u came to the wrong "gate-way"
cause "stevie wonder" say u ugly thats bad when a "blind date" say//
maybe its a bad day... take some time to rest
but becoming a fake rapper is this con-quest//(con artist)
i give it to u your flows are "slik" cause they even "slipped" past u
so turn that how to rap book cause its past due//
take u out with a "shot in the arm" like a "lethal injection"
u remind me of "ben wallace" always gettin "rejections"//
with no recollection...that means you life is science fiction
but ur rhyme are on an upper floor in critical condition//

these are some of my lines i spit in my first battle they maybe weak im planning on progressing but im showing that i have potntial so u can holla at me

u kinda nice man.......

...i'll talk with R-Rated and see whats happenin.....

You are defently R.A.W material fams

Come to R.A.W and you will be gurranted a spot

I'd let you join RAW, But ya need a few battles first, but if ya intrested get a battle open, drop a verse i'll peep it an let you know what i think

but you definately got potential, i'm feelin it, man.

a yo what do i have to do to holla at your crews or whatever

go in 2 da raw krew forum & drop 2 linkz &/or a keystyle ov no less than 6 lines


in da tryout thread in our raw krew forum mayn, can u do dat plz? u shuld be in da krew ur dope

Yo MC.....

Got a new elevation crew called WAR

They'll be battle league, punchline comps, we'll hook up crew battles for y'all.....an you'll be affliated with RAW, If ya intrested let me know, man.

Yepo man You Know the deal