Weddin Day
 

The tune is like Trapped in the closet by R. Kelly, same beats..enjoy even tho it might seem like a ripoff

Gonna start rippin while I’m grippin ya sides
tellin ya its all good when I’m lyin inside
somethin burnin, inside my soul
I know it ain’t right, but who’s to know
I know that my man’s at home
but I wasn’t even supposed to let this
go,
Now I can’t even wear white, to my
wedding, its in a few hours or so.
Its been great, and I appreciate, I think
oh wait, I gotta go, might leak,
this to him, I gotta go now,
get ready because, I gotta propose,
gotta say I love him, cuz I really do
all I wanted was to try on shoes,
but now I got a helluva deal
and this is really crazy, man
fo real,
come on now, leave the room
before he comes in, and it all is doom
So he put on his tux, and left the room
came back in and said where’s the groom?
I said you should know, you’re the best man
He said, girl he ain’t here, I said Damn
I thought I heard somethin in the other room
I heard the door open and up pops my groom
He kisses me on the cheek and says lets go
Its time to get this show on the road
While were walkin down the aisle I’m cryin
cuz I know what a lie I’m hiding
While we’re sayin our vows and I say I do
I look in his eye and all I see is doom
eyes darken and he assumes,
he backs away and whispers what is that?
I said what baby? Its nothing that?
He said no you can’t see it girl,
Someone left a nice little perfect swirl
I’m thinkin ok, it’s a bruise,
he said girl, it’s a hickie, this is not cool.
I said baby, it can’t be, cuz you’re the only man for me
now the best man is panting like crazy
cuz he knows what he did and he’s hazy,
I can see da boy behind da groom start hesitatin
I can see da groom in front of me start meditatin
All these people gaspin in suprise, tears fallin from my eyes
How could I be so stupid to have an affair on this day?
My should to be man gave me an evil grin pulled down his
tux collar and showed me a matchin whirl.
I twirled around to my best girl, she said, sorry girl
but he wanted a trip, I said I see how it is, we all gonna
skip,
so this is how it goes down, both of us not wanting to stick around
he said baby I love you, I just had to know, I didn’t know that you
would do it tho,
I said you know I can’t leave him alone, and I needed to know before
I left this room
He said fair is fair and this is still uncool, but baby I want you to know that
I still love you.
I said baby, wait just a minute here, we both cheated on each other with other’s
best friend’s near.
He said yeah, whatchu gettin to? I said baby, its all up to you, you wanna call
it or you want me for life?
He said baby, I want you for life, both makin our mistakes and now its done,
the audience applauses and now its run.
Goin to the honeymoon, best we ever had, cuz now we know that we’re both
human.

lol, this was good, and yeah it did remind me a lil of R. Kelly, but it was still original.......good use of emotion and imagery, vocab was good also, keep it up

iight.....you should have made the lines a lil longer first off....and rhymed ya words a lil better....but other than that it was good..i enjoyed readin it wit da whole storyline n everything...keep it up