Pen N' Paper vs leady
 

Battle Rules:
Maximum of 3 mins.
6 - 24 Lines

g/l leady.......

No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-09-05 at 09:59 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

leady has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 04:14 PM.

Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 04:16 PM.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/leady_music.htm

4 personals... hes banned from rap battles for cheating.... cant remember wat else i said its a freestyle so fuck it.. bla

At first is just a lil introduction kinda funny then thats when the beat starts and the verse aight......the name is pop LEADy {Leady Diss}
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/w...glock_music.htm



The Verse is below

With the way leady lived his life he must have an unhealthy condition
Slowly growin up wit black kids in the hood u bout to lose ur position
Leady is claimin to be hard and lived a struggle life but wurrs ur mack son
Wack kid thinkin u tougher then me but he is just another Curtis Jackson
He was unwanted by his parents so he dreams of some day he’ll get paid
He raps worst then the blizzard but it aint comin so u never getting made
U talking shit to me leady was ur first fucking mistake
cuz everyone knos u fake now everyone in LL is gonna take
My lyrical beating and see what RAW is WAR has in stake
Ill make u lose ur appetite when I hit u wit a knuckle sandwich
English u can speak but really noone understands ur language
U rappin wit Grity man is just a plain evident that we’ll see ur embarrassment
You aint nothing to me Leady u just another U.K. rapper so look for the exit
Man just face it u bout to get knocked out and left unknown and forgotten
Ur just straight Dr.Suess and I’ll leave ur stink rhymes in the trash all rotten
Leady is pathetic ill break him and remove him out of RV permanently
His raps sound like nursery rhymes that lil’ kids take their naps in elementary
Ur dumb ass is so stupid that u barely got stuck in school and couldn’t even go to college
That’s y regression brings u more depression then ur mom and that’s y u lost ur fuckin knowledge

Voted For: leady

Leady:

Youre flow was aiite...good punches...some shit aiite..decent..punches werent that funny and didnt hit hard attall...it was ok but wasnt feelin it atall sorry dawg...

Flow was good
Punches aiite
Rest - not good

PNP:

Im sorry but not feelin ure flows...u stuttered constantly...it put me off...ure style doesnt get at me attall..the intro was so whack...im sorry aint got nothing to say about ure audio...I think ure lyrics were a lil better than his but the way u spoke really put me off..im sorry...but 4/10..

Leady Gets this for me..RTF or I will get this vote removed

This was feedback posted for leady
 

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remember it was a freestyle.... i knew it wudnt take alot to beat pnp so i didnt try hard at all... ill return fav 2moro its after midnite now so will do it wen i wake up ite

stop swayin tha battle leady u punk dont get coky aight bitch it was a fast song that i made up and that vote is getting DQued anyways is a crew vote.......lol

LOL @ u bitchin.. YOUR crew mate voted against you... i doubt it would get dq becos he is bein real wit da vote.... bein cocky???? your da one bein cocky... ur lines are beyond stretched.. u stuttered n sounded scared of da mic... ur verse was wack to be blunt man learn ta accept ur a newby n not nice

This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
 

tie!

nuf said

both verses wuz hot, I couldn't figure out who was better

Voted For: leady

yo, imma give to this to leady, bascially because he had more of an audio verse.
pnp, your verse didnt sound like it was ment for audio to be honest lol, it would have been good for a text battle, but it didnt really flow to the beat or anythin. 6/10
Leady you had a aight verse you know, cuz i always look for someone who has multis in their verse, and it flows to the beat, nd you did those 2 things.8/10
no hate, just sayin my opinion.

rtf, on one of the battles in my sig. peace

that was a freestyle aswell that leady did, so i found that quite impressive.

you reppin the uk well, keep it up.

ohhhh aight then yea my verse was stretched for a text battle but yea thnx for votin uppin this for more votes