WhiteLight vs Intermental
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-09-05 at 11:02 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Intermental has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 11:03 AM.

Yo check here:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/intermental_music.htm

Its my first ever audio period...so be easy lol...and WhiteLight is an audio leader...so...

Lyrics:

(Problem Child Beat)

Look at this eminem wannabe, dont lose yourself,
Claimin he from Detroit, bitch dont bruise yourself,
THe only way this bitch will beat me if he was to cheat,
This guy dont need a prayer, he need an in-home priest,
The only way this guy wud be sick if he was to throw up,
Man he livin a dream, hope he thinkin he wont blow up,
Yo man youll never have an afro, youll never hve brades,
Stick to the wigga style, even white boys have brains,
Yo man White Light jus like MJ and harrass lil children,
Yo man RV aint for you dogg....go back to finland,
Yo RAW jus carry you around cos u had the only audio ablity,
Now they got the sickest audio in me and you jus a liability,
Yo its time for this bitch to seal his fate,
Wigga dont hate..............appreciate

~~~~Fades Out~~~~

Verse Two (Lean Back beat):

Yo man a lil word of advice...dogg jus elevate,
That doesnt mean battlin those under 8,
But he battlin me, is summin wrong in his brain,
Its like I cracked it open and its gone insane,
After this hell probs stop showin his battle record,
Then stop rappin completely and pull out his mic chord,
Chuck his mic out the window, and then himself,
Commit suicide and then lose all his health,
Ill make him into his idol and dr.dre,
Not the beat maker, the one that operates,
Cos hell need a doctor when I beat him,
Crack his back, and then knock him in his chin,
Im questionin RAW because White's the audio leader,
It makes us look bad, jus the only bad feature,
Its time to darken up the scene, its time for a fight,
Its time for the White Light to enter te Black Night

WhiteLight has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 11:44 AM.

Yo my song will be cleared by tommorow so check tommorow....pz...~1~

check lyrics from s/c.........................................

uppin this shit...................................

yo uppin this our first battle....yo man i will RTF...yo my SC is cleared now so you can listen to my shit

Voted For: Intermental

ight....


inter: this was ight for a first adio pucnhes were there emotion was meh... quality wasn't good flow was ight overall it wasnt a bad first audio

whitelight: damn i hate your voice lol, u didnt flow on beat at all really punches were there but they didnt connect coz your emotion and flow were horrible..

v/ intermental he had a better track really better punches flow n all round better..

rtf on my mad do battle link in the sig

Yo Ill do that now...thanks for the vote...uppin.....

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This was feedback posted for Intermental
 

Just lookin around................................

Voted For: Intermental

ok this was so easy to judge...

inter - your verses were pretty hott, flowed well, need a new mic! werd, the punches hit, gud havin the lyrics there for u to read along with, nice change from track half way through.... very gud for a freestyle... gud verses..

whitelight - how are u the raw audio leader, you sound indian, and u cant even understand what u said, all i could hear was u talkin bout choppin off his dick... u need a new mic and voice i cant realli say what u did well or not...

inter got this shit easy.. werd.. inter gud audio..
white thanks for the laugh dawg!

Voted For: Intermental

LMAAOOO :laugh: at WhiteLight's drop LMAOOOO and he thought he was gonna beat Phenom in roud 1 of Got Skills...this kid talks so much shit and his shit is wacker than wack lol....:
-whitelight u need to lower the beat
-up your vocals
-post ur lyrics
-get a better mic
-not use eminem beats just makes u look a copycat MC
-i understood literally nothing u said.....
-and not talk shit, when u cant back it

Intermental:
first thing put a sock over your mic will get rid of the POPS on your Ps and B's and also run an click/pop elimator in noise reduction............i can hear what ur spittin, the punchlines themselves arent all that at all, you flow is a bit choppy try and write to your beats....memorise your lyrics if u can then spit em, will giv u more emotion n ull spit clearer...not bad 4 a first audio cuz

VOTE- INTERMENTAL: for actually being audible, and punching and attempting to diss his opponent