Abash vs Souljah
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate
No d/r

g'luck :thumbup:.

Minimum posts to vote: 350

Check in by: 07-06-05 at 08:31 PM

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Expired battle win

Abash has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 08:02 PM.

Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 08:05 PM.

this bitch scrambling for war, yet he still unprepared.
so i told him to bring the shit - dude showed w/ his underwear!
spitting sick words? nah. in this race you'll be placed 3rd.
cuz souljah dont need broadband, to be band-width herbs!
we commenced war, and you getting smashed with shells.
& even ur name shows, you cant be complete without the L!*

* his name contains a "L" and L as in loss.
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if you dont get the rest of the wordplay pm me or dont vote :thumbup:.

Yo my nigga how you gonna figure that you're ill g,
Nigga think's he hard when homosexually he's guil-ty,
With split personlities he couldn't beg props from himself,
Cos the only time you hard is when you Bashin to the top shelf, *
Lyrically i see your ass aint even gained a full license,
Already you're a has-been gettin knocked out like tyson...

*check his name - self exlanatory

Voted For: Abash

IP:


Yo my nigga how you gonna figure that you're ill g,
Nigga think's he hard when homosexually he's guil-ty,
homosexual lines = :nono:, every homo concept is played cuz - 6/10
With split personlities he couldn't beg props from himself,
Cos the only time you hard is when you Bashin to the top shelf, *
you courd have whored this kid of his name bre, decent attempt at a personal nonetheless, gd flow - 7.5/10
Lyrically i see your ass aint even gained a full license,
Already you're a has-been gettin knocked out like tyson...
this was a weak ass closer fam, tyson linez :nono - 6/10

-up creativity
-come original
-use personals better
-work on syllable counts
-write 2 abeat

this bitch scrambling for war, yet he still unprepared.
so i told him to bring the shit - dude showed w/ his underwear!
gave me a chuckle, not too bad, g flow n set-up -7/10
spitting sick words? nah. in this race you'll be placed 3rd.
cuz souljah dont need broadband, to be band-width herbs!
wordplay is decent, dope flow to line, couldve have been wrded better but original and creative - 7.5/10
we commenced war, and you getting smashed with shells.
& even ur name shows, you cant be complete without the L!*
this bar was weak, worded poorly and a shitty concept, it made me go -_-.....-7/10

-up personal use
-better punches

no hate to eitha of you...UK-AC

Ok uppin for more feedback............................

uppin this battle.................................

uppin this shit for real...................................

uppin this battle

can people please fuckin vote..................................

Voted For: Abash

alrite, well abash, i aint seen anything by u b4 but this was a decent battle rite here. both ur verses flowed well, everything in both verses was self explanatory which is good.
both verses lacked personals which are always good to see, but i havta give this one to abash cuz his verse was funny

this bitch scrambling for war, yet he still unprepared.
so i told him to bring the shit - dude showed w/ his underwear!
^^^humour's always a plus.

we commenced war, and you getting smashed with shells.
& even ur name shows, you cant be complete without the L!*
^^^ the set up line here was wack but the finisher was good, a good attempt at nameplay.

soulja, i've seen u come a lot harder than this, i think u werent expectin much from abash. The only bar i thought was good is

With split personlities he couldn't beg props from himself,
Cos the only time you hard is when you Bashin to the top shelf
^^that was good but one bar wont win it 4 u.
the homosexual and tyson punches r so way beyond played! but no hate to either i just think abash got it this time.

This was feedback posted for Souljah
 

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