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2Fast2Furious 07-06-05 11:42 PM

Sad Goodbyes.
 
Ever felt like you were doin all you can and still
ur life seemed outta hand?
The people you loved dyin all around, you sittin
there depressed and no cause to be found
Blamin yaself when the car came, the crash so
loud still echoes in ya brain
You cry as you imagine ya friend and the shot
that ended her life and brought tears to ya eyes
The night the phone rang and u had to go
to the hospital cuz ya mom was in ICU
while your hearing Amazing Grace in your head
your realize everyone you love is dead.

Wake up this is a test, wake up, its for the best
Because now they’re not suffering anymore
The Lord has his reasons for letting them go.
Cry and cry and blame yaself, but later on
Come to God and let...him come in, because
there is your peace, He’s been where you been
you just gotta let him in.

You realize through it all life is a vapor, but why does
everyone have to go down like a sheet of paper.
Everyone’s in the ground, 6 feet is where they’re found
ur still up ahead not sure what to do, scared to think the
next might be you.
Askin the Lord pleadin for mercy, for everyone still alive
and your safety.
U feel so helpless and disconnected, wanna go and try and
relieve it.
So you try and try, but you just cannot die, you hear a voice
inside sayin you cannot lie, to yourself because you have
to be strong and go on, bigger plans for you and this is
not long.

Wake up this is a test, wake up, its for the best
Because now they’re not suffering anymore
The Lord has his reasons for letting them go.
Cry and cry and blame yaself, but later on
Come to God and let...him come in, because
there is your peace, He’s been where you been
you just gotta let him in.


R.I.P Misty Buck c/o 02 car crash, Elizabeth Manley c/04 car crash, Diane Banks murdered(aunt), Robert Montgomery heart attack @ 37, Daniel Wahls cancer 49, R.I.P All you who served it all.

Christianite 07-06-05 11:52 PM

this was good, good flow and a lot of emotion, vocab was good also, keep it up

2Fast2Furious 07-07-05 12:04 AM

thanks ya'll uppin

Lyriclesolja 07-07-05 12:37 AM

wow 2fast you droppin those OM's like crazy keep it up........i liked this peayce nun more els to say...oh and you should sign up for Higher Thinking league in poetry something tells me you would be good at it...BTW The M. nice Sig. .........

2Fast2Furious 07-07-05 11:03 AM

thanks uppin 4 feed


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