Predator vs Gangrene
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-07-05 at 03:10 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Predator has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-07-05 12:11 AM.

Gangrene has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-07-05 12:12 AM.

Gangrene is garbage, and his flow retarded/
he a snitch we all know who the narcs is/
U can read all my posts if u want/
I'm the best on RV in months/
So after this battle, call me sire/
cause after this battle I'll be so great I just might retire/

I put up a weak verse just to show how weak Gangrene is.

Fuck Predator, he weak, he can't see me,
So I'ma beat'em, 5-0 clean, just like K- Trini/
U mad I said that ?, well, Trini merked u hater,
Pred u garbage and ya Wins-low like Urkel's neighbors/
I just don't know why u think u betta for,
If I set his throat on fire,he still won't spit a hot metaphor/

Explanation:
>Predator lost a battle which he said he won to K- Trini 5-0. I know it's not even close.
>On the show Family Matters, Steve Urkel lives next to the Winslows
>When I said he Wins-low like Urkels neighbors I was referring to his number of wins on RV.

Voted For: Gangrene

nice battle, kinda one sided though
gang had good punchlines, a solid flow, and good wordplay. plus he actually dissed pred.
to be honest, pred's verse was so bad i didnt even have to bother explaining why i voted for gang...
much respect

comin y'all need to vote I smashed Gangrene let's get serious

Voted For: Gangrene

okay both of u have lots of maturing to do. i think gangrene got this battle. he had better personals than predator. both of u can work on the punchlines and everything. keep at it and eventually ull both get it.

drop an honest vote at one of my battles against hotgirl06or slik flo

uppin for some votes...............................
y'all gotta vote i smashed him

y'all gotta vote I smashed Gangrene easily.
He is garbage. I will beat anynody on here

Voted For: Gangrene

Fuck Predator, he weak, he can't see me,
So I'ma beat'em, 5-0 clean, just like K- Trini/
^^Lmao....love this line.......
U mad I said that ?, well, Trini merked u hater,
Pred u garbage and ya Wins-low like Urkel's neighbors/
^^Decent wordplay.......
I just don't know why u think u betta for,
If I set his throat on fire,he still won't spit a hot metaphor/
^^^nah.....played

Well........I can't really give ya mad props from that 1st bar.That would be hatered and biased.Gotta vote honestly.That 2nd line shoulda been used as a set-up or sumtin.The 2nd punch was a nice wordplay.The 3rd bar was played.

Gangrene is garbage, and his flow retarded/
he a snitch we all know who the narcs is/
^^^Nope.....this mad weak son
U can read all my posts if u want/
I'm the best on RV in months/
^^self glorified.....not a punch
So after this battle, call me sire/
cause after this battle I'll be so great I just might retire/
^^self glorified.....

Predator......you got an ego.U think you crushed this guy and you also thought you beat me.Face it....you at the bottom of the barell and you need to improve...So..take this advice....

1st-Fix ya structure up...dun end lines with"/".Nobody does that anymore.Try to keep all lines the same lenght.
2nd.-Do not self glorify.Work on dissin the other guy and that only.Save that glorifing shit for Open Mic.Do not just state shit.Be indirect.It's all about metas and wordplay.Look at Gangrel's wins-low line for example.Shit like that ya gotta get.

Keep ya head up and keep elevatin.

Vote-Gangrel
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Y'all gotta vote.
I smashed Gangrene easily.
Gangrene is shitty

Voted For: Gangrene

LOl Predator Your The weak one dog LOL

Explanations

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Aii Man Your drop was aii nuttin specail def couldve been better the personals are what really helped you win this battle and the fact that predator is jus a lil small on th epunchez and he supplied no personals so that made you look like the strong point in this battle if you ask me so you get my vote

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Man Your drop was basic it sounds like a regular diss to someone that you first meeet and your punchez were def not on target and basically your whole verse didnt amount up to what it shouldve been so ...you dont get my vote in this battle

RTF In The battle link in my sig ASAP or this vote gets removed

Predator and Gangrene Yall Both RTF in my Battle By Tonight Bcuz I see Yall Both online now

OR THIS VOTE GETS REMOVED

and predator dont vote against me jus becuase i voted against you

Everybody knows i won that battle in my sig so dont go actin crazy

I'm not gonna respond to Predator's comments. That's not what I do. I'ma just let the votes do the talkin for me