.ORiGiNaL. vs HoTgIrL06
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-08-05 at 02:56 PM

Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in.

HoTgIrL06 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-08-05 02:56 AM.

.ORiGiNaL. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-08-05 03:05 AM.

I Don't Know Why U Wanna Battle Me, But Imma Give It A Try.
Yea Imma Newb, But Im Known To Make "original" Niggas Like U Cry.

I Usually Take These Battles Serious, But Imma Take Diz One Az A Joke.
Cause I Already Got Dis, U Beatin Me, Bitch Please There's No Hope.

My Lines Are Comin Hard, So U Betta Duck By Layin On Da Floor.
Dey'll Smack U In Da Face, And U Want Be Askin To Battle Me No More.

Look...

Damn this lame just sucks! I mean, face it slut
You "aint been tight" since the "nite u gave it up" *
Forreal, this broads wack, talkin like she all that
But she "wouldnt get support" from "her bra strap"
Your bout as weak as they come, believe it, you suck
I mean, you aint "spittin heat"...............................
just cuz u "aint brush ya teeth for a month"

Good Luck

* gave it up=had sex, which means she's no longer tight

Voted For: .ORiGiNaL.

.ORiGiNaL. - Sick spit man, your flow was good, and your punches was hitten hard.

Best Line - Damn this lame just sucks! I mean, face it slut
You "aint been tight" since the "nite u gave it up" *

Worst Line - I mean, you aint "spittin heat"...............................
just cuz u "aint brush ya teeth for a month"

HoTgIrL06 - Pretty decent flow, and you had some OK punches in your spit.

Best Line - I Usually Take These Battles Serious, But Imma Take Diz One Az A Joke.
Cause I Already Got Dis, U Beatin Me, Bitch Please There's No Hope.

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - This battle goes to ORiGinal, hands down. He had the better punches and his flow was sick. Hot I like your style but Org just came harder with the punches - n0 HatE.

Vote - .ORiGiNaL.

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Voted For: .ORiGiNaL.

v/ Original....less wack of the two






I Don't Know Why U Wanna Battle Me, But Imma Give It A Try.
Yea Imma Newb, But Im Known To Make "original" Niggas Like U Cry.
u tried...but didnt quite make it
I Usually Take These Battles Serious, But Imma Take Diz One Az A Joke.
Cause I Already Got Dis, U Beatin Me, Bitch Please There's No Hope.
..yea i took this as a joke, too
My Lines Are Comin Hard, So U Betta Duck By Layin On Da Floor.
Dey'll Smack U In Da Face, And U Want Be Askin To Battle Me No More.
nope...

Damn this lame just sucks! I mean, face it slut
You "aint been tight" since the "nite u gave it up" *
lol...funni
Forreal, this broads wack, talkin like she all that
But she "wouldnt get support" from "her bra strap"
..so played....
Your bout as weak as they come, believe it, you suck
I mean, you aint "spittin heat"...............................
just cuz u "aint brush ya teeth for a month"
..whats with the periods?....kinda funni though

eh, Original had two good bars....Hotgirl didnt...plain and simple

Voted For: .ORiGiNaL.

I Don't Know Why U Wanna Battle Me, But Imma Give It A Try.
Yea Imma Newb, But Im Known To Make "original" Niggas Like U Cry.
um..not a very good opener
I Usually Take These Battles Serious, But Imma Take Diz One Az A Joke.
Cause I Already Got Dis, U Beatin Me, Bitch Please There's No Hope.
elementary
My Lines Are Comin Hard, So U Betta Duck By Layin On Da Floor.
Dey'll Smack U In Da Face, And U Want Be Askin To Battle Me No More.
anotha elementary line


Breakdown-I have been readin up on some of your battles and it seems that you really are a newb...all you have to do is stop KEYSTYLIN(which i hope these are) are put a lil more thought into your rhymes... 2.5/10



Damn this lame just sucks! I mean, face it slut
You "aint been tight" since the "nite u gave it up" *
nice opener
Forreal, this broads wack, talkin like she all that
But she "wouldnt get support" from "her bra strap"
haha nice
Your bout as weak as they come, believe it, you suck
I mean, you aint "spittin heat"...............................
just cuz u "aint brush ya teeth for a month
ok...wasn't as strong as the rest of your verse


Breakdown-Nice verse there..kinda short left me wantin to read more...kind of fell off there at the end but everything was nice...Overall 7.5/10

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Voted For: .ORiGiNaL.

yo original this shit was tight mayne good punches, flow, everything.

HoTgIrL06 you need to elevate alot girl!

Voted For: .ORiGiNaL.

Original takes this for better and more hardhitting punches, nice creativity too, good vocab and ya flow was on point for real. Hotgurl basically had a lot of self-glorification and no real hardhitting punches or shit so definitely gotta work on that...