Back for the 1st time
 

these dope lines grab a hold of ya mind
that dope rhymes i keep rappin bout how cold i can rhyme ( c'mon shine)
but wit a nine kid im shootin ya blind
point blank ima hit everytime i hope you think that im lyin
cuz i done been in this bitch all my life
i could make one call tonight you'll get sliced


Im just warmin up give me a min

First Of The Concept Wasn't To Good Try To THink Of SOmething Better ,The Flow Was Okay Nothing Special, The Structure Was Fucked Up Fix That Man, No Hate

not so good, I bet this was ur first OM so no prob.. just elevate wit your structure, use a more extended vocab.. flow was aight, and make your verses a lil larger.