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Chaos vs Mike McGuire
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8-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-09-05 at 10:47 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Mike McGuire has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-08-05 10:50 PM.
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Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-08-05 11:11 PM.
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Its Murder When Some Herb Like Dis Step Through The Door...
Cuz I'm Not Playing When I Say I'm Not Here To Baby Sit A 6 Year Old GIRL... Ya Flow Must Be Weak,..Str8 Outta Pussyness You Don't Roll Deep Wit Heat... You Stay Undefined,...Like Gun Shoots Goin Off On A WHITE PERSONS STREET... Your Fresh From The "LOW RANKS" But Still Gotta Alot To Work On In Life... I Know Its Hard When You Sit Down To Write And Wondering How I Got YA WIFE... We Don't Wanna Hear Your Wackness,...Strobe Should Give Me The Win Please "STOP DIS"!!!!..... Cuz I'm Crazy..When You See Me Like The Grim Reaper How I'm About To SEAL HIS COFFIN... I Know He Just A Little Fella,...He Ain't Gonna Do No Harm... Dis Was A Easy Win,...Like Jason Kidd Throwing Out His ARM... ~1~ |
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I battle hardcore, and I rap X-Rated
Imma kill you in this here battle You an your lines should be cremated. Your lines are garbage and not worth to be recyled man Don't try to re-use them, just throw them in the trashcan. Imma ''K-O'' you with Steve Austin's ''Stone Cold Stunner.'' You beating me is when the Coyote catches the Roadrunner. This is my first battle since being on ''Rapverse'' in 2004 You can't shift rhymes fast back at me, not even with a Z4. Z4 = BMW Z4(car) |
Voted For: Chaos
I battle hardcore, and I rap X-Rated Imma kill you in this here battle ^^didn't rhyme and wasn't a punch You an your lines should be cremated. Your lines are garbage and not worth to be recyled man ^^didnt't rhyme and a very weak punch Don't try to re-use them, just throw them in the trashcan. Imma ''K-O'' you with Steve Austin's ''Stone Cold Stunner.'' ^^didn't rhyme and not a punch You beating me is when the Coyote catches the Roadrunner. This is my first battle since being on ''Rapverse'' in 2004 ^^^So wat if it ya 1st in a long time....... You can't shift rhymes fast back at me, not even with a Z4. ^^gonna finish that bar? You had no punches.None of the bars rhymes.Structure was terrible.Lot of your rhymes made no sense as they didn't diss.Like....why would we care if it's your 1st battle since last year? Its Murder When Some Herb Like Dis Step Through The Door... Cuz I'm Not Playing When I Say I'm Not Here To Baby Sit A 6 Year Old GIRL... ^^didn't rhyme.....weak punch Ya Flow Must Be Weak,..Str8 Outta Pussyness You Don't Roll Deep Wit Heat... You Stay Undefined,...Like Gun Shoots Goin Off On A WHITE PERSONS STREET... ^^^OK......first punch trown in this shit Your Fresh From The "LOW RANKS" But Still Gotta Alot To Work On In Life... I Know Its Hard When You Sit Down To Write And Wondering How I Got YA WIFE... ^^^Kinda stupuid.....but OK We Don't Wanna Hear Your Wackness,...Strobe Should Give Me The Win Please "STOP DIS"!!!!..... Cuz I'm Crazy..When You See Me Like The Grim Reaper How I'm About To SEAL HIS COFFIN... ^^doesn't rhyme well and too basic I Know He Just A Little Fella,...He Ain't Gonna Do No Harm... Dis Was A Easy Win,...Like Jason Kidd Throwing Out His ARM... ^^OK Ur punches were pretty weak.Against anyone else you would have lost horribily.At least ya trown some punches so you got this shit easily.But work on makin all ur shit rhyme,wordplay,and metas. Vote-Choas |
^OOOOOK....Get The Fuck Outta Here Fag......Uppin.....
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Voted For: Chaos
yo chaos got this battle man nice ounches man yo mike work on some harder punches next time aight drop an honest vote at my battle vs hotgirl Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Mike McGuire
gotta give dis battle to MM.... basically because he actually rhymed...both verses were weak.. chaos-you have to fix your structure up and actually have some sort of rhyming...your punches werent that strong either mike mcguire-you have to be more creative with your punches..transition your lines better also...you should also try to have all your lines be the same length but that isnt a big thing just makes it easier to read and make the structure look better Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
I battle hardcore, and I rap X-Rated
Imma kill you in this here battle You an your lines should be cremated. Your lines are garbage and not worth to be recyled man Don't try to re-use them, just throw them in the trashcan. Imma ''K-O'' you with Steve Austin's ''Stone Cold Stunner.'' You beating me is when the Coyote catches the Roadrunner. This is my first battle since being on ''Rapverse'' in 2004 You can't shift rhymes fast back at me, not even with a Z4. Yo K-Trin you got it all wack. The line ''Imma kill you in this here battle'' is a tranistion line to get to the 3rd line that rhymes with line 1. Then it continues on...Next time read mroe carefully |
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Voted For: Chaos
Mike McGuire I battle hardcore, and I rap X-Rated Imma kill you in this here battle You an your lines should be cremated. ^uhm okay opener, no punch though Your lines are garbage and not worth to be recyled man Don't try to re-use them, just throw them in the trashcan. ^thats quite nice punch, okay wordplay Imma ''K-O'' you with Steve Austin's ''Stone Cold Stunner.'' You beating me is when the Coyote catches the Roadrunner. ^again good wordplay formed into punch This is my first battle since being on ''Rapverse'' in 2004 You can't shift rhymes fast back at me, not even with a Z4. ^uhm no at first line, bleh @ second one Chaos Its Murder When Some Herb Like Dis Step Through The Door... Cuz I'm Not Playing When I Say I'm Not Here To Baby Sit A 6 Year Old GIRL... ^haha, nice opener, made me giggle Ya Flow Must Be Weak,..Str8 Outta Pussyness You Don't Roll Deep Wit Heat... You Stay Undefined,...Like Gun Shoots Goin Off On A WHITE PERSONS STREET... ^hey hey, got anything against white people dude! Haha, nah but good punch here Your Fresh From The "LOW RANKS" But Still Gotta Alot To Work On In Life... I Know Its Hard When You Sit Down To Write And Wondering How I Got YA WIFE... ^coo coo, keeping consistent with em We Don't Wanna Hear Your Wackness,...Strobe Should Give Me The Win Please "STOP DIS"!!!!..... Cuz I'm Crazy..When You See Me Like The Grim Reaper How I'm About To SEAL HIS COFFIN... ^nice wordplay here formed into a punch I Know He Just A Little Fella,...He Ain't Gonna Do No Harm... Dis Was A Easy Win,...Like Jason Kidd Throwing Out His ARM... ^nice closer right here |
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