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Valerie 07-09-05 03:49 AM

Love feelings.
 
until u reached into my heart i was broke in 2 but u gave that back provoke now my heart "Beat" can finally soak cus my emotions were played with and bruised but now u put my jigsaw together cus love is for ever kept within hearts shared between anthony and Diana got this love on bullseye darts we the first ones ever to be ranked "charts" its like a 2 way relationship cus when yours ends with ty the next one starts differently I act upon you way better then before your flat out beautiful dont let anyone tell u differently kissin ya neck gently seein my baby gurl express her self intently

Valerie 07-09-05 04:50 AM

so wat u guys think about it? :thumbup:

Skitz119 07-12-05 04:38 AM

i'm new to writing about poetry, but i think it was hott. i was feeling the emotion in it. real talk

Valerie 07-18-05 05:39 AM

Anyothers cmon ppl wat u think besides structure?


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