Jay Mez vs ChImNeY
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

30 mins after check

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-12-05 at 03:17 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Jay Mez has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 03:18 PM.

ChImNeY has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 03:18 PM.

Said Battle me? betta Bite your lip or get sliced to shit wit text savagry, cuttin Punches to collaps your chest cavity, make you breath fast, pass through where I sleep moving casually and watch your punk ass get Jumped like Dead Batteries

your hits were misses, mine end existance, who am i battling agian, shit?... oh yea, a child holding a lit fuse who still isn't WiC-KiD... bitch, dissapear or split in the quickest instant, when my drops slice you in two like a magicians assistant


My barz cook Five ova flames like camp food, making a mess ov this Dude, dam foo', is that really tha best you can do, were you exspecting to loose? cuz my punches whaled on ya like Catching Shamoo'

I sling tha Rocks when i bring tha shots, Ding your knott while you cling to GOD, and you must sing alot, cuz if you spit those barz, you'd hear more ah-quit-it's then the King Ov PoP...(micheal Jackson, the king of Pop, was aquitted ov all charges)

So allow me to show you the way out like Exit-Wounds, now it looks like your chance to win Just-Left cuz i'm more then all-right and abadextris-Too, Bitch, I 'sentenced you to death' like Texas-Do..

shud do....................

yo, dis dude bout 2 get merked by a fuckin rookie,
ya records 0-1, wow u wanna fuckin cookie,
ur rhymes arent gangsta, ya shits way too soft,
u might as well call yaself chedda bob and shoot ya dick head off,
i pull out the explosives and gernades if u offend me,
HIT DA DECK!!! im bout to throw dis shit inside da chimney,
u talk like u fuckin got a dick for brains, shit for brains,
pull dat gat out, ya pants will probobly have shit stains,



weak but its jus my first verse good luck homie

Uppin This........................................

Voted For: ChImNeY

Chimney wins easily :love:

Voted For: Jay Mez

aight chim you had horrible rhyme schme its sucked ass.....jay mez got this better rhyme scheme and punches i think.....the first line was simple but made me laugh

yo, dis dude bout 2 get merked by a fuckin rookie,
ya records 0-1, wow u wanna fuckin cookie,

vs.

nothing

pretty much both need to elevate and come wittier

Voted For: ChImNeY

Jay Mez-i can't blame you...or make fun of the verse cuz it was your first...so imma give you elevation tips...try to add harder hittin punches...cuz the ones you were throwin were not hittin at all...and also try to incorporate a lil more personals...cuz when it comes down to it personals are better then punches...but dat chimney line was nice...had me rollin..aight



Chimney-keep doin what you do...had a nice verse...but the structure to me wasn't good...i personally don't like to read a verse like dat ya know...but nice..

is this wes city guy serious....wow wes city better have lyrics like Jr Writer or canibus or someone up there cuz he is givin his two cents into everything like he is real nice...look at the verses again son...you might have been misreading

This was feedback posted for Jay Mez
 

tight battle. i cant vote yet. nice metas n mutlis both, the personals were a lil dry but its all good

Voted For: ChImNeY

chimney get my vote he was all over that .
with good jokes. nothing was stupid,or made just to rhyme .
K>I>U.

Voted For: Jay Mez

Is this a dissing match or a battle coz Chimney there just came out with words......but u came out on top with good structure....opening and closure.....a bit weak with ya verses and rhymes but it'll do...

No Hate chimney

vote: Jay mez