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C-Hood 07-09-05 04:11 PM

Mc Mystique vs C-Hood
 
Battle Rules:

16 lines max
challenger spits first.
I'll set it up
30 minutes after check in
no d/r
no c/v

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-10-05 at 04:11 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 07-09-05 04:12 PM

C-Hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 04:12 PM.

C-Hood 07-09-05 04:43 PM

i got a name on rapverse...and youse an artist that's unknown/
you suck while you sober you just ok when you get in yo zone/

my rhymes do e.z. pass and yours get stuck in a 'net' like vince carter/
so when you get writers block imma be right there to give you bars like a phone charger/ ghost writer...15 dollars a line

listen son...i 'bear arms' like i'm missin a sleeve/
i'm real and you fake like ya moms weeve/

i know ya moms....you lucky she good wit her neck from the front/
and the only reason why you not livin on the streets is cuz i payed for the rent this month/

and she lonely so i might be over there tonight/
and when she get done wit her mouf she gone give you a kiss goodnite/.ehhhhhhh

you got 3 posts and think that you can deal wit a vet/
forget gunplay wit 'techs' imma have a 'tech' put you together like 'lego set'/ E.Z.

g/l

System 07-09-05 07:07 PM

Mc Mystique has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 07:07 PM.

Mc Mystique 07-09-05 07:19 PM

With lyrics as bad as your verse,rv.com should have you banned, How the hell you gotta pussy an still be a man?,
I'll leave you under white sheetz lookin like the klu klux klan, You keep trying ta face me with your lyrics at mass,
But i know your a fan so i'll autograph ya bodycast, Ya whole cliques done faced me, face it b you cant touch me, Face it you couldnt beat oprah winfrey, Let aside the fact im bout to set your soul free, Sry to tell you but you didnt come close to ya rapping dream, Instead you wake up everymornin look into the mirror an scream, You a homo son sit down an lisen, Ima let of 2 clips an aint one bullet gonna end up missin

C-Hood 07-11-05 12:28 AM

what is really good wit these votes yall lets get right

CaSiNoVaZ 07-11-05 12:47 AM

Voted For: Mc Mystique

Had good punchlines and i think flowed good

c hood - had real good flow punch lacking punchlines

C-Hood 07-11-05 10:07 AM

^^^if you are serious aight....uppin wit dis.........

Mc Mystique 07-11-05 03:51 PM

Uppin 1. thankz for the vote mayn. Much appreciated. Lets bring in some more votes

C-Hood 07-11-05 06:29 PM

don't sleep we need some mo votes ya heard me.............

C-Hood 07-13-05 04:48 PM

uppin wit dis ladies and gentle men...lets go........

STAY FOCUS 07-13-05 05:03 PM

Voted For: C-Hood

C- Hood got this one
Vocab --- C-HOOD-- y ? u may ask Mc Mystique started two lines with the same words "face me" and i know he wasn't aiming for no parallelism cause you need three and only three to do that . . .
Structure-- Both need help but C-hod got that--- easier to follow------ lines are little stretch but they went somewhere--
Whcih brings me to word play and punches C- Hood got that , however i was expecting something more creative than "Yo Mama" jokes -- but thats just me-- u still had some very funny lines especially the "kiss u goodnite" --
Overall c-hood took this one

(X)eed 07-14-05 04:23 AM

Voted For: C-Hood

ohhh my god...watta weak battle from both.... fuck dat hahaha...

and she lonely so i might be over there tonight/
and when she get done wit her mouf she gone give you a kiss goodnite/.ehhhhhhh
^^^^^
C-Hood... dat wuz the only best line you had in your whole verse..... duz dat say sumthin???? and u aint no vet...lmfao..... dude..u good but cmon.... no hate you no vet.... but good drop here.... 1 thing though ...drop the fuckin thing wit da momz and shit k... its old ,,,, not really funni reall kinda fukin sick ... wtf has his mum done to you.. you battlin him not his mum... and if you provin dat ..u own him by talkin all dat shit bout "blah blah blah wit ya mom" thats soo fuked up... dats lame..and sick.. fuckin use your talent in rhymes..which i know you have mate you didnt take this battle out by much..... you just had stronger punches and structure.... both your flows was wack..

look into the mirror an scream, You a homo son sit down an lisen, Ima let of 2 clips an aint one bullet gonna end up missin
^^^^^
the wackest line ive herd in agez.... no hate but wack..so wat if hes a homo Mystique... fuk they humans too ..and atleast have word play when usin a strong diss like dat... u ended dat with jack shit... lol..... vote has to go to Hood 4 harder punches....

return the favour in my battle against 4fil aiight/// thnx

Mc Mystique 07-14-05 08:27 AM

upppp lets get some votes...............................

J.D 07-14-05 03:28 PM

Voted For: C-Hood

yo man. sorry MC mystique man, but im gonna have to go wit C-hood for this one, he a little bit more experienced at this shit i think. dont get me wrong ur verse woz gud, just a lil' bit simplistic though. C-hood on the other hand had quite a tite verse actually, none of the punches were played, it flowed well etc. sorry man, but i gotta give it to C-hood.
At least its an honest vote.


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