STAY FOCUS vs MC:Philosopher
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-09-05 at 08:34 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

STAY FOCUS has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 08:06 PM.

Yo check it . .
Battling me is like a "orthodontist" visit, so boy "brace" urself
cat i spit hot fire get ready to be melt/
Even if this dog got a masters at "art" of "freestyling" @ Harvard University/
he wouldn't be know as a "Philosopher/ MC"/
"Clean" ur lines up if you wanna go far/
If you looking for good "soap" you've got to raise the "bar"/
I bet when they read ur verse its gonna be like thirsty jokers saying wheres the pucnch line/
cat give up u can't ryme/
cat i fucked u up and gave you a "limped" and don't try to pull out a "lame" excuse/
Its over i won this battle end of u

MC:Philosopher has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 08:31 PM.

Battle me u got nothing to lose so imma leave u flowless
You use your name as motivation to make sure that u stay focused
How do I know this……… ima philosopher I know lots in this joint
Like I know u looking forward to a loss now that’s the wrong focal point
Its like beauty cause this battle is in the eye of the beholder
It gets colder…… u cant win this battle if u was a solider
You like r.kelly telling all chapters of how u was trapped in the closet
Until u came out and donated to your boyfriends semen deposit
I flow like a fossit……cause im moving on a continuous basis
So find new places…… when this battle over you’ll need an oasis*
You came with the big dogs so know its time to play
You wont stay…… even your focus is running away
You couldn’t handle this battle if I told u to hold this
You looking at the king of rapverse so no wonder u wanna stay focused

*oasis place or time of relief: a place or period that gives relief from a troubling or chaotic situation

okay good battle man lets get the voting started

This was feedback posted for STAY FOCUS
 

LOL . .. its hard to vote . . . both had a great drop . . . focus i'm impressed for a newbie u did pretty well especially against philosopher who also drop a sick verse . . . um . . i promise to post a vote i just gotta think about it more

This was feedback posted for MC:Philosopher
 

yo mc philsopher u r crew mayn! ima tell u watz good, ur verse wuz ok. need to wotrk on ur punchlinez mayn, an ur wordplay culd b betta 2, but i think u got da win here i wuz feelin sum ov ur rhymez, juz stay ''focused'' on making a mockery of ur oppenent, stay on a personal level miexed wit sum humouress pounchlinez, decent verse though mayn


uppin 4 krew

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

aight.. yo!

Mc:Phillosopher - aight flow, structure, not a big vocab, nice nameplay, n multi's.. tight punches, good personals

Stay Focus - no flow, no structure, good punches, no personals, FORCED RHYMES

^^^I think I said enough on this:

Focus - Use personals and fix that structure.. just an advice, no hate

and MC, RTF... lol ... battle on my sig.. 1 MORE VOTE PLZ!!! lol

Overal:
MC - 9/10 (jus a lil fix in the structure)
Saty Focus - 5/10 (I already told u what to do.. good luck on the next battle)

V/MC

thanx khaoz ill work on it fam. and flo verse just take your time dont rush and make the wrong vote no matter who it is. you uppin for some votes

uppin need some more votes in here....................

uppin for some votes in here drop your link ill hit u back

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

Voted For: STAY FOCUS

stay focus stayed his focus on this battle withh good opening and an alrite closing so overall i think that he took this 1 by an inch....AHEM BY MILES

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uppin man and stop coming to my battles with your votes that are hate votes man u a herb