Konvict vs Un-Fuck-Widable
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-13-05 at 11:58 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

un-fuck-widable has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 12:38 PM.

Im A HeavyWeight-Hitter, Gives "Fake" Tips On How To Elevate-Quicker
Ill Levitate-With-Ya, Ill Make It Un-fuck Related so You Can Imitate-Sicker
No Wonder He Forces-His-Lines, Didnt You Know I Bring Caution-With-Mine
Only Reason You Alive Today, Is Because They Didnt Finish The Abortion-In-time
I Eat Lines Like Yours-For-Lunches, Didnt You Know You Bring The Poorest-Punches
And You Only Joined Today, Dont Be Making Tourist-Assumptions
Lines Like Those Should Be Used-In-Sigs, I Got The Balls To Abuse-This-Dick
This Fools-A-Kid, He Drools-With-Spit, A Rap Supreme, His Got the Tools-And-Kit
Im the blessing-Of-Dope, Your lucks Low, Like Your Always Messing-With-Hope
And Dont Lie, I Saw You Trade Them Lyrics For The Carressing-Of-Blokes


yeh multis like fuck holla wid ya verse

Konvict has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 12:59 PM.

Now class, quieting down
Please may I have your attention ummm kay
Before we start class, i’ll read out the register umm kay

Robin banks – yeah am here
Hugh jarse – WHAT!!!!!!! Yeah am here
Benjamin Daniel

Who the fuck calls there son Ben certainly when there lyrics aint jamming
So it’s the return of bill & pen the flower pot men, but this child he don’t smoke weed
He stays at home n subtracts the fact of sellin rap, but then all adds up he’s shit at that
Then trys a publicity stunt, n diss’s one third of Klp, gets his name in the paper
Named and shamed, but who could blame little bens no jamming with is rapping
so get back in your high chair and play with your toys, I aint no Michael Jackson
a don’t play with little boys, and watch them grow up, give them special gifts
then watch them throw up, so unlike peter pan I am a man with a plan
but I bring peace to this game, n u claim to be a heavy weight hitter
but I float like a butterfly and sting like a bee, knock you out for the count
konvict, rhyma raida n da blingz, were the kings of this ring
so take it to the top, n when you don’t make it in hip hop
you turn pop, release a track with wacko jacko
another faded out flop, but your just another new kid on the block

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

un-fuck.. ur structure was ok cudnt vget ya flow but its text... some funny lines lol @abortion dats jokes.... messin wit mhope was nice too.... u coulda flipped on dudes name tho its soooo ripable.... u got ya name cos you jack ya lines from other mc's type shit lol konvict i couldnt read yours... wtf is wit dat intro??? its text u soooooooooooooooooooo dont need it...... n ur structure didnt exist n lines e.t.c were bla... really poor verse kid

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

un-fuck-widable - had good punchlines and flowed better

konvict - need to get at the person more had some punchlines

vote - UN-FUCK-WIDABLE

This was feedback posted for un-fuck-widable
 

yup thot both verses had different styles and coz a started i aint gonan vote, just letting ya all know this

y do i have to always battle noobs???upping this shit.......................

the noobs r verbal pain and broken insanity and underpressure i aint implyin u guys r noobs!

gd gd :P thats a much better description. I can't really comment on those Named N Shamed.

This was feedback posted for un-fuck-widable
 

Elevate, then maybe I'll consider considering joining your crew.

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

I vote Un-fuck-widable he had hella good multi's nice wordplay and hard punches and good structure

upping............................................ ........

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

ok................................................ ............