one mic vs lyrical mage
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-11-05 at 02:35 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 02:36 PM.

lyrical mage has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 02:46 PM.

steppin to me, ok, but expect to see your ass get clapped/
dont resist, imma kill you today so take your casket back/
i aint the same as i was, man i've been through escalation/
this guys so dumb, he in class like "wots respiration?"/
this guy cummin strong? now, that would be a surprise!/
cuz the only time you're hot, is when sun-rayz hit your eyes!/
its you cummin hard that counts... man just practice/
the fact is, its 'ludicrous', you cant come with 'large amounts'/
instead of that, man, you cummin plain and regular/
so watch me flip and manipulate this guy, like he was my cellular.

yo, rhyme scheme switches for 4th bar so check that before votin. no hate just rappin, Lyrical mage.

this kid wanna try to take out the great lyrical mage
well come on up so i can make you dissapear on stage
looks like your sig is covered in that strong purple haze
thats the only way youll get hott enough just to blaze
this nigga thinks hes as hott as burning drug loot
so i guess thinking of whack rhymes is your stong soot
thought he was bout murder me and send me to heaven
but hell need gadgets like his avatar double o seven
and when i say gadgets i mean paper and pencil
plus a pencil shapener for his writing utencil
they give you one mic and they give me a sword
for you to freestyle and for me to cut your cord
i just killed this kid and it didnt take me an hour
yo flame starts burning but coach tells you to hit da showers

you uppin on this shit ya heard me

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: one mic

kinda weak battle here need to make more dissses not fake threats aight but ill give this to one mic had a lil better lines and structure was good and to make yall pack more punches need o work on dlivery so it can pack harder aight but yall did good for beginners but really step ur game up in battlin leave all the fake threats behin nd work on dissin aight.....v/ one mic.........

appreciate the vote man, yer i no, i need to elevate quite a lot. uppin....

you had a nice verse u know, LM.

Voted For: one mic

my lil baby bro can do much more better verses than him.....on the other hand...one mic had the best opening and closing and overall i thought that one mic took it

thanx man. uppin...

uppin..............

yo kid that was a tight battle i need to elevate too lol

uppin............