ThaCrunkOne vs lyrical Mage
 

Battle Rules:

5-7 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

check in 30 minutes.
Verse Must be droped in 15 minutes..

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-10-05 at 08:14 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

ThaCrunkOne has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 07:45 PM.

lyrical mage has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 07:53 PM.

Im Battlin Dis ~Whack Fuck~ Dis Kat Cudnt beat Me Even if I ~Lack Luck~
dis bitch thynk he a ~Lyrical Mage~ Ima SHow Dis Man How I Spit Wit my ~Miracle 12 Gauge~
dis fool Goin Nowhere Lyke Students On Minimum ~Wage~
Only Way You Cud beat Me Is If We Already Planned Dis battle Asa ~Stage~
eave Dis Fool disombobulated askin "whats my ~age~"


ima end dis battle and dis foo's career wit a ~KNOCK OUT~ Dis faggot Watches
Eurotrips Beach Seen Wit His~Cock Out~

Dis Bitch Rhymes Are ~fake~They Starten Ta Sound Lyke Drama From ~Ricky Lake~
Ya Lovin Ya Bitch Cuz She Lovin Mi ~Stickey Taste~ When Yu On Ya Way Home We Pulled
a ~quickie Wit Haste~

ima take dis kat back n teach him sum ~real Intelligence~Ima Send Ya To Mi
Lyrical Prisin Witout Cuttin A ~Deal Fo Ya negligence~

Dis Man Thynks He Is Straigh ~Street~ but wudnt know gully if i Madem Bit Tha
Curb Stomp His Head Make His Teeth ~Obsolete~ Ima Take Bitch N Make Her My Hoe
Lyke ~SKEET SKEET SKEET~

dis fool ~packin duds~Only THing Dis Bitch Is Doin Is ~Attackin Suds~I Stay
~Smackin His Buds~ I Stay ~Smackin Dis "Blood"~ Dis man Cant Spit He Got A Speach
InPediment lyke Elmer ~Fud~

iigh yur up cuzz...dis only took me about 10 mins aint too fancey..

we got another rapper whose a wanna be neo
hes the crunk one acting like hes neos alter ego
not only that but his love for animals is at a high rate
he stays home at night to watch his beastly porn tapes
look he has a white rabbit avatar dropping it like its hot
his fetish for little baby animals, will it ever stop??????!
in this kid pockets he keeps a bunch of orange carrots
cause he likes it in the ass from little animals like ferrets

beastly porn is this nasty ass shit where people get fucked by animals its really sick man

Voted For: ThaCrunkOne

Crunk:

Im Battlin Dis ~Whack Fuck~ Dis Kat Cudnt beat Me Even if I ~Lack Luck~
dis bitch thynk he a ~Lyrical Mage~ Ima SHow Dis Man How I Spit Wit my ~Miracle 12 Gauge~
Nah

dis fool Goin Nowhere Lyke Students On Minimum ~Wage~
Only Way You Cud beat Me Is If We Already Planned Dis battle Asa ~Stage~
eave Dis Fool disombobulated askin "whats my ~age~"
ok first line..

ima end dis battle and dis foo's career wit a ~KNOCK OUT~ Dis faggot Watches
Eurotrips Beach Seen Wit His~Cock Out~
blah its ok

Dis Bitch Rhymes Are ~fake~They Starten Ta Sound Lyke Drama From ~Ricky Lake~
Ya Lovin Ya Bitch Cuz She Lovin Mi ~Stickey Taste~ When Yu On Ya Way Home We Pulled
a ~quickie Wit Haste~
not really feelin it..

Dis Man Thynks He Is Straigh ~Street~ but wudnt know gully if i Madem Bit Tha
Curb Stomp His Head Make His Teeth ~Obsolete~ Ima Take Bitch N Make Her My Hoe
Lyke ~SKEET SKEET SKEET~
curbstomping lmao thats funny skeet line gay..blahh..

dis fool ~packin duds~Only THing Dis Bitch Is Doin Is ~Attackin Suds~I Stay
~Smackin His Buds~ I Stay ~Smackin Dis "Blood"~ Dis man Cant Spit He Got A Speach
InPediment lyke Elmer ~Fud~
decent last line ok closer

Overall: Work on flow, and harder hitting punches...this wasnt a very good verse IMO, some were decent but some were just wack.

Mage:

we got another rapper whose a wanna be neo
hes the crunk one acting like hes neos alter ego
wtf..nah

not only that but his love for animals is at a high rate
he stays home at night to watch his beastly porn tapes
corny, could have been worded A LOT better..so nah..

look he has a white rabbit avatar dropping it like its hot
his fetish for little baby animals, will it ever stop??????!
lmao NAH...

in this kid pockets he keeps a bunch of orange carrots
cause he likes it in the ass from little animals like ferrets
ok enough with the beastiality its gay and your wording is terrible...SO NAH

Overall: Verse was bad..playing off beastiality and its not worded well, no good punches, and your flow was off and its REALLY basic...

Vote/Crunk..

This was feedback posted for ThaCrunkOne
 

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