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J. Luth 07-10-05 11:45 PM

Ok, so i'm writing this song and i'm stuck.. somebody help me please.. :(
 
aiight nm I got this shit down. ~_~

K-Trin 07-10-05 11:46 PM

I'm goin to copy that story and put it on my own CD....................................

J. Luth 07-10-05 11:46 PM

^lmao... ok, good for you. ;)

Castro... 07-10-05 11:48 PM

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Originally Posted by K-Trin
I'm goin to copy that story and put it on my own CD....................................

you still wouldn't be consider dope.... :shoot:

KOOL COL-B 07-10-05 11:48 PM

she took a shit in tha box! werd

King Solo 07-10-05 11:49 PM

K-Trini................you lick balls................

object cud be.......................an apple pendant, or sum shit that involves an apple

basic meaning behind that is she is seeing if you will take a bite

adam 'n' eve shit nah mean :shoot:

K-Trin 07-10-05 11:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Symbol
you still wouldn't be consider dope.... :shoot:


Maybe....but I'll still be better than you.

K-Trin 07-10-05 11:50 PM

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Originally Posted by LL Cool K
K-Trini................you lick balls................

object cud be.......................an apple pendant, or sum shit that involves an apple

basic meaning behind that is she is seeing if you will take a bit

adam 'n' eve shit nah mean :shoot:



No you lick balls.......................MY ONES.................Now I'm tellin you get off.

La Cosa Nostra 07-10-05 11:50 PM

Thats a weird story man.. It also edges on Immortal techniques - You never know with the note she left behind after dying n shit.

Also I think you should definatly do something better than "i went down to the chemist and this hot bitch started commin onto me"... You should make it you went to a club or something. You gotta be a damn porn star to walk into a chemist and have the bitch just wanna fuck you then and there.

And further more, what kind of best friend would do a test to see if he friends bf was loyal, just to have her friend kill herself cause of it.

I think you needa go back to the drawing board for a bit.

J. Luth 07-10-05 11:51 PM

aiight, what y'all think about it's her wedding ring I gave her when I proposed to her? like I can say we engaged? would that work?

Castro... 07-10-05 11:51 PM

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Originally Posted by K-Trin
Maybe....but I'll still be better than you.

you;ll neva be half as nice as me even if you had god to ghostride for you

La Cosa Nostra 07-10-05 11:51 PM

K-Trin, keep beefing in the beef forum.

I thought we had an understanding kid.
You dont fuck around in this forum and I dont get you IP banned from RV.

King Solo 07-10-05 11:52 PM

or to slightly change your story with the object meaning n shit

you cud have it as you going to pick up a gift wrapped present that you open afterwards and it turns out to be a bracelet (a manly one) that was gonna be a gift to you and engraved on it is sum shit like "The Best Guy A Girl Could Wish For" or sum shit like "The Most Loyal Guy A Girl Could Wish For"

sumthin like that.......

K-Trin 07-10-05 11:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Symbol
you;ll neva be half as nice as me even if you had god to ghostride for you



same thing I told Solo......get off my balls......kepp the beef in that other thread.U know how Nos's panties crunch up.He banned my other account from LL for a week.

J. Luth 07-10-05 11:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Nostradamus
Thats a weird story man.. It also edges on Immortal techniques - You never know with the note she left behind after dying n shit.

Also I think you should definatly do something better than "i went down to the chemist and this hot bitch started commin onto me"... You should make it you went to a club or something. You gotta be a damn porn star to walk into a chemist and have the bitch just wanna fuck you then and there.

And further more, what kind of best friend would do a test to see if he friends bf was loyal, just to have her friend kill herself cause of it.

I think you needa go back to the drawing board for a bit.

tru but what I meant was my girl in the story was one doin' the test. She told her best friend to see if I would cheat wit her or what not. and then she killed herself over it or somethin'. but that's a lil bit extreme I guess. lol but thanks for input yo ~_~


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