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Daubs (0-0) vs. Stanza (3-3)
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday
No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Drakel or Drama Queen). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extention, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be disqualified. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absense. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous. Don't ho-show because you will be banned if you do it twice. We can understand you cannot drop due to certain circumstances but if this happens a second time, you're banned from the league for 2 weeks. If you signed up for both leagues and you no-show in one league twice, you will be banned in both leagues! Try to limit the freeposts, we will have a chat/beef thread for that. Also give fully explained votes, if not your votes won't count! New rule: first to get 3 votes wins If you dislike the topic, you have to contact your opponent and agree on a different one Your Topic: Chosen Roads |
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..So many options, too many decisions in life..
..Choose the correct roads, you will turn out just right.. . . ..Misjudgements are unavoidable, How can I be blamed.. ..I should have told the authorities, shoulda complained.. ..I was just seven at the time, only an innocent child.. ..All could have been avoided if only i hadnt of smiled.. ..I had no idea why he asked me to do it, jokeing i guess.. ..Until a newsflash apperared...of a peadophilia suspect.. ..If only my father was notifyed, i wouldnt be emotionally scarred.. ..My uncle wouldnt be just behind bars, he'd be physically harmed.. ..I chose the wrong road, and was unbearably saveged.. ..My life has been disrupted, i cant bear to be married.. ..Can never touch another being, my life just isn't worth living.. ..All could have been avoidable, if i chose the correct road in the beggining.. Meh, new type of thing for me, done in 10 minutes. GL :thumbup: |
Chosen Roads One Looked right And One Looked Better Took The Right One and Left The Better The Right One Was So Wrong I Could See As I Wen Down This Road Of Diversity The Other Road Was Heard to Be Nice With Love And Peace In Everyone's Sight I couldnt Say I Understood The Problem I was In But I was Sure I Coud Solve Em But Yet I Left The Better And I was Wrong And Now Im here Singing This Song I Gold Coal When i couldve Had Gold Alll Becuase I Had...... Chosen Roads -Quickie- |
ok this was an aight battle but for an upcomer in topicals daubs u did fantastic man my vote goes for u u had a good vocab but keep improvin in that and had a good imagery on it aswell and stanza ur versewas aight too....but u did it like u didnt have time or sumthin only like a few lines expand a lil more on them aight but 4real u need to do that aight good imagery as well from u but not showin alot of cretiveness here maybe is cuz it was kinda short make it at least a 20 line u kno.....but good job to the both of u but my vote goes to daubs just for havin a better imagery, vocab and very impress when ur new so/ daubs........
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critic hitz at focal points
nigga i be breakin joints simlpe at the point creative by the heart i rip bitchez to the core i shred em apart sik ill matic lines crazy ass rhymes bitch im the opt1k throwin these punch lines niggas be hatin on cuz i rep my crew what the prob wit that bitch so do you too. muhfucka opt1k one in the buildin any way shit stanza WAR still my fam but no longer could i have stayed!!!!!!!! i vote for DAUBS nice put together and it was longer....stanza u a tight rapper just make it longer i would have voted for you if it was longer and deeper with creativity.....yo peace out FAM...WAR still my fam just not in the crew any more startin out wit some other crew don't know yet but if shit goes bad or i get elevated to be an iller rapper i'll holla at RAW and drop it to show how i elevated niggaz this is opt1k!!!peace out WAR!!!!!NO DOSRESPECT TO YOU TEPH OR ANYBODY ELSE AT WAR/RAW BUT WHEN I ELEVATE TO A BETTER LEVEL I'LL HOLLA AT MY #1 FAM>>>RAW FOR ACCEPTIN ME TO WAR IN THE FIRST PLACE THANKS FOR THE OPPERTUNITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PEACE!!!!!!!!! |
I dont Want Pen N Papers Vote to count bcuz he hatin on me rii now bcuz we In a Battle so I dont want his vote to count please
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i didnt hate i gave a full explain vote on this battle so....but wuteva u gon be a bitch then DQ it then.....
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short and sweet not alot really to show much emotion or imagination... but i thought daubs toook this purely becuz i thought he had a better understanding of the topic... ight battle i thought daubs emotion was better and showed more skioll in his piece..
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2-0 K.O to Daubs
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