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technique 07-11-05 09:46 PM

flow deadly
 
im getting you exposed punching you in the nose
sokeing ya blood in ya cloths and rip out ur vains from your throat
the rap demon is here got your little asses screaming
staring over your sholders with eyes direct at you gleeming
looking at how sad you are, cuz ya nothing but a retard
who i can smash up wid bars that'll land on you hard
lyrical madness giving you sadness, i'll smash ya face
don't talk cuz im pissed and now im gonna break
get your life taken and i'll rattle your brain nice and shaken
you can't stop the hating who the fuck you think ya facing
im breaking these flows im hating these hoes
im just rapping till I know that there leavin wid der casket closed
your rapping blows like males sucking on dildo's
I seem to be making more friends most of them are foes
you can't make dope lyrics if you got a ghost writer
your not a fighter so stick to being a biter

Kawn Flixx 07-11-05 09:52 PM

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Journal!st 07-11-05 09:58 PM

yo technique that was aight homie ill-matic lyrics
puttin it out wit attitude so other people could feel it
i give mad respect and support for breakin necks
standin at the top yelling"TELL ME WHO'S NEXT"
fuckin bitches filthy stinkin hood rich!!!!!
lip stichin face hittin now look what i done did
i'm the mister V-E-R-S-E
well know for the name verse O-N-E

peace it was tight lyrics ya threwdown dawg,
OPT1K/VERSE1

B.I.G. 07-12-05 03:21 AM

aight

im getting you exposed punching you in the nose
sokeing ya blood in ya cloths and rip out ur vains from your throat
^^^^ nice but not for an opener
the rap demon is here got your little asses screaming
staring over your sholders with eyes direct at you gleeming
^^^^werd... nice one
looking at how sad you are, cuz ya nothing but a retard
who i can smash up wid bars that'll land on you hard
^^^^the bar is nice but not feelin it
lyrical madness giving you sadness, i'll smash ya face
don't talk cuz im pissed and now im gonna break
^^^^started good, ended fucked up
get your life taken and i'll rattle your brain nice and shaken
you can't stop the hating who the fuck you think ya facing
^^^^10/10 nice one
im breaking these flows im hating these hoes
im just rapping till I know that there leavin wid der casket closed
^^^^ nice, but you can eliminate this: "im just"
your rapping blows like males sucking on dildo's
I seem to be making more friends most of them are foes
^^^ no...
you can't make dope lyrics if you got a ghost writer
your not a fighter so stick to being a biter
^^^^ wow! nice punch, but not as closing

Overal - 8/10

Teknition 07-12-05 03:45 AM

pretty decent lyrix, some good punches, flow wus iight, over all i give this a 7/10


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