Keystyle by Knaledg1
 

I kill tha ill wit' my sick skill,
Any cat wanna step up finst to get grilled,
Make yer' body shake like yer' ass just got filled,
Full of bullet holes and yer' body's twitchin' still,
I'm mic cold 'cuz I make cats fold unda pressure,
I eat'cha like Hannible Lectre,
Ghost writer when I'm spittin' phantom lectures,
Back up son I'm doin' damage to yer' sector,
Scary vocablary,
It's just secondary,
Battle and bury any Tom, Dick, or Harry,
You best read to keep up wit' me,
Every word I learn my ability increase by three,
Call me Wolverine, call me iron lung,
Call me wha'eva you want son I'm done,
One. :shoot:

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wow .. that was awful .. like seriously

HA! HA! HA! not good at all

yo I see you dont have wack on polls....were is it???....hmmm

Damn Homie..this was horrible... you really need to elevate..and get better
use more creative words..structure was bad try to match up your bars..make punchlines... use metaphors... and mutlies... and you'll be good..

Elevate

Much luv fo' tha feedback except Maddrapper I don't care wha'chu think homie. One.

eh yo i gotz mad love it was descent but ya need to elevate work alotmore wit flomore he'll teach you shit u never thought so holla at him for elevation...

oh dang didn't know flo more was your teacher so you his colleague well more power to you all bu tno doubt you can improve (BUT LOOK MOST PEOPLE ON THIS SITE RIGHT HERE STRAIGHT UP HATE HELL I BEEN HATED A LONG TIME SO YOU DON'T HAVE PROBLEMS I HAVE THEM)