opt1k vs Pair-A-Docks
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines...
Due in 30 mins...
No Dickriding...
No Crew Votes...
No Recycling...
No Biting...

...good luck!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Pair-A-Docks has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-12-05 12:07 AM.

opt1k has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-12-05 12:09 AM.

I wanted a battle that would get me respect...this is not it...
I am battling a kid...who can't see shit that's why he'sd opt1k...
How you gonna type when ya can't kid....consider yaself tarnished kid...
I would say there's still hope...but you're just to retarted to win...
Man I hope that you don't think that any of your flows are dope...
We all want ya dead....so we'll let hangman show you da ropes...
Man this kids softer than eggs man.....and that's a breakfast food...
Man you ain't shit....watch how my rhymes lyrically wreck this dude...
Every script you have ever written have all been hollowed n played...
I would feel heat from this little faggot....if I even swallowed his greandes!

nigga i hold it down for the crazy bitchez
just like ur moms gettin pussy stitchez
poppin at ya nigga cuz you a straight fool
after i finished ur moms all of a sudden came you....
claimin u 15-2 on the net
nigga rip oppenents apart and break necks
tell you what homie just leave now
cuz i know if u continue u gon bite my style
mister i-am-15-2-on the net
just move out the line homie...haha....NEXT!!!!!!!!


:shoot: pair-1-docks just got his body full of gunshots :laugh: :laugh2:

nigga i hold it down for the crazy bitchez
just like ur moms gettin pussy stitchez
poppin at ya nigga cuz you a straight fool
after i finished ur moms all of a sudden came you....
claimin u 15-2 on the net
nigga rip oppenents apart and break necks
tell you what homie just leave now
cuz i know if u continue u gon bite my style
mister i-am-15-2-on the net
just move out the line homie...haha....NEXT!!!!!!!!


pair-1-docks just got his body full of gunshots
__________________
I put thoughts to a melody
Most catz dont belive in me
But now look people im still standin
cuzi aint givin up i was born 2 b rappin.

come on people vote homies!!!!!!!!!for reals!!!!!!!!!!

uppin for more votes

Voted For: Pair-A-Docks

"just like ur moms gettin pussy stitchez" that don't make any fucking sense nigga...change yo shit

thanx and dammit people votye please

Voted For: Pair-A-Docks

Damn, Both verses sucked ass!! The punchlines were barely there and no metas or similies in sight!

open: Docks [was below average but at least attempted a puncline]
close: Docks [a good comparison, not enough to be a metaphor in my book tho]
personals: Docks [he used his name and tried to reverse it into a punchline
metas: None
punches: Docks [he had about two punchlines, but Opt1k had none]
multis: None

Both could greatly improve and Opt1k, add punchlines, metaphors and a few personals in your verse instead of running off a lot fo bullshit.

Voted For: Pair-A-Docks

Pair A Docks. He dissed better and had better structure.

Voted For: Pair-A-Docks

um...do i have to explain...its obvious that this battle was wack but paiadocks got it....punches,flow,structure,vocab,opener,closer,m etaphors

vote-Pair-A-Docks

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