The Lord is with Me
 

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As I have the Lord all my hope is constant, while I suffer forever in a yoke of bondage//
Carnage that chokes your conscious with ropes of homage, Exploding notes admonished //
And upon this I’ve spoken honest and been giving nothing back but a broken promise//
A potent conquest packed full of atrocious monsters, that want to destroy His heavenly grace//
I’m the center piece faced with trials and tribulations, temptations of the vilest innovations//
Sin Acting like a barrier that’s hiding my impatience, but the Lord gets me flying to my station//
Feeling the vibe of an invasion, I must stand tough, keep my hands up and fight for the occasion//
If my guard falters I could be torn up quickly, its sort of sickly, but I know that the Lord is with me//
My heavenly force is mixing with the stipulations of the forth infliction, an important diction//
Evolution is just another source of fiction, and I watch as brothers in Christ get dealt with scorned affliction/
I’ve been warned with visions to stay away from the evil, when I face other people to pray with the feeble//
I must reach out to the escaped and deceitful, and may they be captured, and sent to God on the day of the rapture//
Messages straight from a pastor, flanked with the stature that’s helping me give praise to the master//
I’ve seen people become blatantly tampered, pampered by they world, and their flame just gets dampened//
But soon my prayers were thankfully answered, as they search Him out again, and fully repent//
But watch for the pulling descent that drags you deeper and deeper into the gully’s of men//

this was good man, flow was good, vocab was pretty good too......the only thing negative about this is the //, those are not necessary, its easier to read without that, but anyways good drop, keep it up servin the Lord

those are usually my line breaks but the lines are too long for this sites thing, but in word proccessor it looks fine

those are usually my line breaks but the lines are too long for this sites thing, but in word proccessor it looks fine......thx for the feed uppin