flow verse vs ~Conflict~
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-12-05 at 07:57 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-12-05 07:28 PM.

~Conflict~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-12-05 07:28 PM.

im from bk where da big bois flock/
well come to ya hood, kill ya and clean it up with "red soxs"/ *
ill tear ya ta shreads wit my lyrical merks/
dis nigga garbage ima show'em how his own "flow verse" works
im a bit wild, you accepted i smiled/
ask ur mother and figure out why they call u a "problem" child**

*hes from boston
**my name is conflict so i fuck his mom and passed my gene to him

Conflict 's battling me to get some "tips"
Cause if he had "cents" he wouldn't come with such weak shit
Let's be serious u just can't rap
Only time your lines will ever be "right" is if u used the"tab"
Named yourself "conflict" before u met me
Change it to "veggie' now cause u don't like the taste of this "beef"
Even if @ the begining of ur verse you typed "H2O"
You still couldn’t "bond" ur lines together to "flow"

This was feedback posted for flow verse
 

LOL . . . love the closer need 3 more post to vote tho . . . SRY. . .but good drop on both parts

Voted For: ~Conflict~

I have to say, both verses were weak and not much came from both sides. It was hard to vote, but overall Conflict had this. I liked his problem child and red sox's thing. Don't get me wrong tho verse, i liked your closer but it wasn't enough...

Punches~Conflict [barely by a few centimeters]
Flow~Both
Methaphors~Both
Similies~None
Structure~Flow Verse
Opener~Conflict
Closer~Flow Verse

comon ppl lets get these votes in

Voted For: ~Conflict~

Potato chips and other thing that taste good to my pallete are on my table right now

juggler how is that enuff for a vote check the rules yyo conflict u pm/ing for votes?

Voted For: ~Conflict~

good flow an punches.. Keep it up b... Do me a favor an hit up my battle sig with an honest vote so i can get these battles on my hands closed.... much appreciated

Voted For: flow verse

vote flow verse

better wordplay...punches hit harder, and he was more creative...

con - get more creative, dont come with weak punches think a little more

no hate





Conflict 's battling me to get some "tips"
Cause if he had "cents" he wouldn't come with such weak shit
Let's be serious u just can't rap
Only time your lines will ever be "right" is if u used the"tab"

vs.

nothin of conflicts

basically flow came harder

v/flow for a better verse

Seriously I Want Juggler's Vote Gone That Shouldn"t Count Everyone Post A Ligit Vote Except Him

Voted For: ~Conflict~

you had better structure and punches...

good opening and closing and thats why i think u took it/..........

Voted For: ~Conflict~

flow verse

Conflict 's battling me to get some "tips"
Cause if he had "cents" he wouldn't come with such weak shit
No wordplay and a fake personal.
Let's be serious u just can't rap
Only time your lines will ever be "right" is if u used the"tab"
Neither can you, bad punch.
Named yourself "conflict" before u met me
Change it to "veggie' now cause u don't like the taste of this "beef"
Self glorification and bad attempt at wordplay on his name.
Even if @ the begining of ur verse you typed "H2O"
You still couldn’t "bond" ur lines together to "flow"
Not a very creative punch. Bad one anyway.

You need to work on making more original punches and personals. Also, try not to include fake personals. Try re wording your punches as well.

Conflict
im from bk where da big bois flock/
well come to ya hood, kill ya and clean it up with "red soxs"/ *
Self glorification and a I will line. Bad attempt at wordplay. Filler too.
ill tear ya ta shreads wit my lyrical merks/
dis nigga garbage ima show'em how his own "flow verse" works
I will line again and bad wordplay punch.
im a bit wild, you accepted i smiled/
ask ur mother and figure out why they call u a "problem" child**
Not that original. Bad punch anyway.

Unnoriginal punches and bad wordplay. Personals aren't that great either.

My vote goes to Conflict for better punches. His wordplay was a little wittier, but both have a lot of room to improve.

v- Conflict