LoDown vs Terry Blay
 

Battle Rules:

1:00 - 2:30 long, house rules..

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-14-05 at 01:50 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

LoDown has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 02:02 AM.

Terry Blay has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 01:18 PM.

ayo, my shit is only like a lil over a minute long if u wanna use that to judge how long u wanna make urs..

i just did mine ral quick, werrd im bout to drop..

thats cool Ill drop tomorrow after I get in form work.......

www.soundclick.com/terryblay

only joint on there..


Lyrics:

LowDown? lemme give u the lowdown kid
Just set ya wifey down to gimme da blowdown kid
Thought just cuz imma rook u gon get tha win?
Please, im bout to let u take a peep into my world, then close the lid
Im bout to back up my call-out like g-unit did 50
but if u re-call it game left, that makes u a groupie
Im bout to lay the smackdown on LoDown like WWE
but the only back-up he got is the kind "Goldberg" does "Whoopie"
Lets do this shit adult-like, ill be polite
Your shit is wack, but your name describes your ranking right
If you want to, you can go ahead and skip this battle
PM strobe and hop on my dick like that shits a saddle
You could give me my first win on my audio record
Go ahead and click to disable viewing dat audio record
Unless u wanna be "Oh and One", winless like the '84 Hoyas
I out-do this kid like a Jedi does Star Wars destroyers

Aight dude, but no feedin' since i dropped tonite..

Ok lets get the votes in this one. Respect ta ya dawg....No ;lest see who winns

Voted For: Terry Blay

LoDown......not that great. You were emotionless and I could hardly make out what you were saying. Plus your flow was not really flowing......sorry dude.....

Terry Blay.......Your quality is bad, but I could actually make out what you were saying. Your track actually sounded like a diss too.....go read my tutorial called "Day 1 Audio Tutorial" and it will help you out with your quality :thumbup:™

Vote - Terry Blay

ummmm ok ......more vote in this please...looks like I really need to work alittle more

Voted For: Terry Blay

lo-down: *listening* beats nice.. dont like wut ur doing with the voice.. its either quality or iono wut it iz... the punchlines were okay.. u dont really stand on the mice wen u do this.. u should really try to stand out basicllt have good delivery wen u battle.. but yeah punclines were okay.. but sorta boring..since it was hard to hear u at times..

terry blay: *listening*
really liking the beat.. lot of energy with beat..

basiclly exactly same as lo.. man this really wasn't a good battle lol.. the flow was off at times.. lines were really strectched.. but jst same with lo...

well jst cuz ur verse seem'd to haev more energy n a few better lines.. i'll give it to you..

vote:blay

Voted For: Terry Blay

ok well i picked blay becuz of the following:

1. his flow sounded alot better on his choice of track, compared to LD

2. his rhymes/metaz were far superior

3. and he sounded ALOT more natural on the track...

the only thing i saw wrong with his track was that his track was a little short...but it was damn good for a first time drop...


LD, i think you could have improved your drop if you had eased up, you seemed very tense, and it seemed like you were reading off a piece of paper, its ok good to pre-write, but memorize it, seriously....not bad tho

TB= 8/10
LD=6.5/10

Voted For: Terry Blay

ok nice battle flow was good from both of yall.....and yall.....had some ok lines not really that much punches from LD but TB had some ill punches.....and had a good delivery.....LD u need to work on ya delivery so ur punches can hit harder and be more effective and try to use a lil vocab some where and there aight makes it more interestin and TB u actually did good keep it up.....just work a lil mo on ya flow aight....and tahts it.....pretty much u did good on everythin else keep it up.....1
v/Terry Blay......
.......rtf against battle wit verse190 in link wit a honest vote

This was feedback posted for LoDown
 

lodown lost this like a mofo..............................