We Run RV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

Efecx wattup?
Verbal Shoota wattup??
Black queen wattup???
B Wattup????
Blackmage wattup?????
Stanza wattup?

RAW IN DIZ, HERE WE GO NAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Da Hook:
I know ya see uz little homeyz...WE RUN RV
I know u cant see me, 'cuz......WE RUN RV!
Even doh yall mad, we both now dat...WE RUN RV!
U wannabe me, wannabe G But.......WE RUN RV!!!
[ha ha haaaa}

Verse:
i see alotta ppl talking, so call it a sixth sense cuz ima see dead people
wordz so electrifiying they say dat lightnin touches steeples when i'm writing
da flowz frightenin, alot ov deez krews hate, plot & debate, lifez great
gettin mad @ font, smoke a blunt, sit back & watch U.E Stunt
dumb cunts, pretending ya all hot, but RAW Kno its juz a front
so we hit'cha frum da back, leave u wid bullet holes in a hospital bed
sheets color red, write da rhymez wita pencil
..................so 4 talkin da gun shyt, guezz yuh do ''catch sum led''
i kno u see wat da fuck i be jottin down, nuthin u can do bout it
u niggaz betta keep it on ''hush'' lyke aftermathz latest hit!*
nostradamus talkin hard, got a beat down frum da nigga Stanza! [WE RUN RV]
Chaos talkin dat hard shyt, but i swear 4 biting strobe shuldda banned-ya
i';ll hand-ya a loss, watch u fagz have da salad on toss lyke a ''head chef''
ha ha ha..RAW DIED?..............Shyt go tell dat 2 stanza, bq, me or Teph
we hit u from da Left.......... cuz u kno RRAW IS RIGHT, WAR Is tight!
sabotage got less ''efecx'' than a parapelgiec trynna punchline fight!
R-Rated dont got shyt on me....unless u can count a few dick-jumpers
u associate wid da gay types, while i hang wit long nossel shotgun pumpers
pump action, we blastin, im 14, but dont get me confuzed
i'm slicka than ''greese'' & U.E Be cruishing 2 catch a BRUISE
U LOSE..............Diz gamez over b4 da ref even blew his whistle
i got soul rebel BULLshittin cuz ov da RED Target aiming frum da missile
diz a keystyle, off da dome & u bitchez be shittin bricks
claiming ur ''syck''...i juz say ur catchin FLU SHOTZ So i call 'em pricks
gay tricks, ridin dicks wid no bitch, it dont make sense
paying ppl 2 join ur krew, dont believe me?...juz ask IMMENSE
Diz situationz a lil tense, beat down diz topical writer, we kno whoz tighter
NOT U....
krew hopper culdnt ''spark shit'' if he tried 2 ignite hiz ''waste'' widda lighter
i'ma ''cryhme'' fighter, call me ''Po-Po'' have u scatterin screamin ''OH NO''
got u scared ''legless'' lyke wheelchair patients having a 'P.O'**
no-flow-hoes, deez vets got less skill than E.C Holding a mic
DAUBS A BITCH!...Trunna eat da ass ov a MALE DYKE! [Tweety]
i swear ALL U KREW r lyke....half man, who dont seem 2 be ''Amazin''
u can call me ''6 Feet'' cuz i grasp da 'CALI-co' & hm YOUNG n BLAZin
which krew thinkz they phazin?...RAW n WAR Iz here 2 stay
WE RUN DIZ SHYT!...Da verbal predator, amerikkaz most...
.......Raps cold as ICE CUBES, But we all kno its a GOOD-DAY!

Da Hook:
I know ya see uz little homeyz...WE RUN RV
I know u cant see me, 'cuz......WE RUN RV!
Even doh yall mad, we both now dat...WE RUN RV!
U wannabe me, wannabe G But.......WE RUN RV!!!
[ha ha haaaa}

Yo diz iz sum keystyle shyt, FALL BACK NIGGAZ! California, 2 da dirty dirty, out 2 da europeans...ITZ ALL RAW BABY!...e run diz, who want wat? NONE OV Y'ALL!


WE RUN RV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

umm that was cool...

...not the best..but it was a good diss..but i do have 1 question..why didnt u jus make a diss to UE?..i mean u tried to diss us throughout the whole thing..

u had some nice punches and stuff in there...i would give it a 7...........

I wuz dissing u & ur krew & anybody else who haz doubted da krew RAW RUNZ RV Diz wuz a keystyle but thanx fo da feedback yo :shoot:

wassup fam.
yeh i thought this was a decent piece. the flow was good, structure can't be faulted and the vocab was above average in this one. the punches were pretty good for real. considerin this was a keystyle i thought it was real good.

yo can you RTF on my OM piece:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199478

~peace~

hey yo thanx 4 da feeback, i returnd da favor 4 u, uppin diz drop

RAW aint runnin shit but their mouths........

Okay Decent Shits Man, Came Pretty Good Here, VOcab Was Basic Shits Though But no DOubt This Piece Was Nice Structure A Bit Iffy But Keep It Up Man

This was an okay peice, I can see it audio.. but I wasnt to fond of structure and your vocab's nice for a 14 year old.
Work on your word play and structure and always, always keep uppin your vocab.

good drop,

thanx 4 da feedback yall & havoc da link wuz posted by souljah i left feed on dat peice if datz aight, uppin

uh, not bad eh....definately dont run RV though......some lines were pretty boring, but keep up for sure, alot of fake shit, and stanza re-used that parapalegic shit for an OM :laugh:

anyways, peace out

decent drop, very in-consistant, good disses on some people, wordplay was flawless, need too up the wording of some of you're bars, structure could be a little better,. but it was straight, nice drop 8//10