Love Jonez (Akay feat. L. Veracity)
 

my homegurl Akay let me hear a track she did and I was lovin' the beat so I asked her to get on it...she sings but was FUCKin' around on the beginning trying her hand at rapping lol...this just a fun love track...hoLLerrrrr at a playa...

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voice is too generic female rapper-ish for myt tastes

but ur flow is nice...and the beat was hot


good track


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screw East coast broads!!!...lol,naw im messiin wit chu....lol..."best one wearing panties"...grimey....i cant argue...i dont wear them often...lol

Listening:

beat is str8....i can vibe....the sound quality could be better....so it'll be clear....
i lyke yur voice....and it doesnt sound generic....trina/khia/lil kim..and them sound generic...
ya lyrics are good....and yur friend was kew with the singing....at least she can sing...(we had this chick on the track...and man!...i can sing better than her).....and she iight with the spittin, too....

overall...pretty str8 track....im realli feelin the sound...got my head noddin

^^Man, what the hell is wrong with you? Your track got three replies in one day - so what are you tlaking about? I only came in here to listen to this because you did it. Don't be a peepee head.


the beat is hot as hell.

First verse recording qual is ASS. Sounds liek she's trying to rhyme through a bucket of gravel, but form what I can understnad of it, the rhthm is on the $ and the lyrics seem to say something worth hearing (though the level of it shoulda been turned up a few dB's. The bass drowns her out).

Second verse, quality is WAY better. Your voice reminds me of a feminized Shyne which in it self makes you sound masculine. On a softer track liek this it dosen't fit. Like Remy Martin on that "take you home" track where she sounded like a homeless man trying to have phonesex. the lyrics are typical and the deliv didn't do anything to make me go "wow, nice".

Ol girls singing at the end is on point. Dosen't sem like an amatuer or anything, and the sound quality is slightly above average.

All in all a better than average song as for as intents, but the SQ on the intro took this down big time and the mundane content of the second verse made it slide into "typical" to me.

Hate it or love it, that's my honest opinion. Uno

yea i like the beat and shawty aight with the singing, The quality is the only problem but the shit is straight fa real. and ya flow is hot as a mafucka, I like the lyrics and shit you spittin nice on there, ridin that beat good and I like ya emotion and all that. I like the whole concept and sound to the song that is hot, sound like somethin youll hear on the radio.

RTF on a Million Eyes
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199779

this tracks decent man,
the beat is fire, the quality is decent better than mine,
nice vocals and lyrics in general,
this isnt really my kinda track but i enjoyed listening to it


nice job on your rapping part, i liked it alot.....your a good female artist, i would like to work with you sometime....