Technique vs Mc Mystique
 

Battle Rules:


12-16 linez
40 minutes to spit
No crew
No hate
No d/r

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-13-05 at 12:39 PM

Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed for asking for votes
-strobe

Mc Mystique has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 12:10 PM.

Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 12:14 PM.

When this kid Finally gets around to battle he chokes/
A defeated hipocrit, he must be a joke /
Im a 3rd degree murderer in life an on the mic /
Ima playa homie, you somethin they call a transvestite /
Im never quiet, i ll light up ya whole block /
Steppin to me you fittin to get shot /
Your name remains unknown in Rv //
Mc Mystique is here to set ya soul free /
I done defeated ya leight an fly weights /
Battlin you is gonna be easy cuz you below a no weight //
Me beating you is the next thing to a halocaust/
So you might as we'll back the fuck cuz this is ya next loss /
Why you talk like you back for redemption?
I got slug's that's hop ya direction an ruin ya complextion /
on for one day an got signed to a crew/
you been rapping ya whole life, Now ya carrer's through /

you ain't got skills bitch no one on rv is going to feel
so take this kill and admit it your corny for real
my flows getting you recked leaves ya like a reject
your music is better played with the tape deck on eject
mystiques a whore so im gonna show u the rap verse door
because everyone hates you cuz ya raps are always poor
this bitch is crying and lyrically his life is dieing
he's a stupid ass and looks like a clown when he's smiling
your apearence is aweful better get urself some new cloths
2 make urself look half good but i forgot u ain't got money hoe
he's not safe not locked up because he's like an animal caged
the wackest rapper ever made always gettin boo'd off stage
you ain't fuckin creative thats why im stripping you naked
your getting hated, your a virgin who ain't even ejaculated
your not elevated so please stay that way kid
because you suck more then you do on ya mummas saggy tit

Good verse tech. G/l.... Uppin dis.. lets c them votes

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Voted For: Mc Mystique

Doth fucked in the idiocy of my rectum tommorow at noon my friend then thank you an i will forever be greatful to you plea

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Voted For: Mc Mystique

you ain't got skills bitch no one on rv is going to feel
so take this kill and admit it your corny for real
garbage
my flows getting you recked leaves ya like a reject
your music is better played with the tape deck on eject
wack
mystiques a whore so im gonna show u the rap verse door
because everyone hates you cuz ya raps are always poor
lame
this bitch is crying and lyrically his life is dieing
he's a stupid ass and looks like a clown when he's smiling
how ol are you?
your apearence is aweful better get urself some new cloths
2 make urself look half good but i forgot u ain't got money hoe
hell naw
he's not safe not locked up because he's like an animal caged
the wackest rapper ever made always gettin boo'd off stage
nice.................NOT
you ain't fuckin creative thats why im stripping you naked
your getting hated, your a virgin who ain't even ejaculated
nope
your not elevated so please stay that way kid
because you suck more then you do on ya mummas saggy tit
just nasty


BREAKDOWN- Verse was garbage...no vocab no complexity no punches NO personals so pretty much a bunch of words written and the last word of each sentence rhymed....thanks and try again!!




When this kid Finally gets around to battle he chokes/
A defeated hipocrit, he must be a joke /
ok
Im a 3rd degree murderer in life an on the mic /
Ima playa homie, you somethin they call a transvestite /
nope
Im never quiet, i ll light up ya whole block /
Steppin to me you fittin to get shot /
no gun play is lame and you used no creativity
Your name remains unknown in Rv //
Mc Mystique is here to set ya soul free /
ok...in the standards of Dr. Seuss
I done defeated ya leight an fly weights /
Battlin you is gonna be easy cuz you below a no weight //
no
Me beating you is the next thing to a halocaust/
So you might as we'll back the fuck cuz this is ya next loss /
no
Why you talk like you back for redemption?
I got slug's that's hop ya direction an ruin ya complextion /
nice vocab
on for one day an got signed to a crew/
you been rapping ya whole life, Now ya carrer's through /
horrible

BREADOWN-can you say disappointed. I am more disappointed then a father catchin his daughter havin sex...you were a lot better in the battle againt me...well imma have to give it to you because you were less whack then this other HERB


ELEVATION

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Voted For: Technique

lol, Technique had sum better punches. Mc Mystique, u didnt have any punches, just talkin bout killin him n shit thru tha whole verse. id say both of u need 2 werk on ya punches n try n make a punch in each bar n shit, u know. no hate Mc Mystique, but Technique just had a couple punches that made me kinda laugh, lol.

your music is better played with the tape deck on eject

coulda bin werded better, but i c wut u wuz tryin 2 say.

because you suck more then you do on ya mummas saggy tit

haha, saggy tit. werd