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Dervla 07-14-05 11:59 AM

~Lady Fiya~ vs Tweety
 
Battle Rules:
20-30 Lines
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding (taking idea)
fully explain votes
no hate votes
vote on all aspects (Imagery, emotion ect ect)
Crew can vote (GW AND TE)

Topic-Floating words


MY FAULT! LOL

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 07-14-05 at 12:29 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.


Win by forfeit

System 07-14-05 12:08 PM

Tweety has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 12:08 PM.

System 07-14-05 12:11 PM

~Lady Fiya~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 12:11 PM.

~Lady Fiya~ 07-19-05 12:06 PM


“…Lean not towards your own understanding.”
-Proverbs 3:5

Intro
It’s not coincidental that sight and sound tend to match in basic symmetry
The same sounds that make our ears tingle can open our eyes wide vividly
The senses help guide in the straight path splitting those that are abnormal
We feel things from the tips of our fingers and hear sounds of paranormal

Floating Words
You won’t meet her directly ’cause you won’t look for her like phone calls
from friends out far, nor green lights for cars.. not even speech for the jaws
they say she don’t exist, it’s a belief you seen it because of those with faith
not the things you see and hear everyday from ringing bells, babies or trains..
but the disabled r able to wait and depend on her, to follow the hands to obey
only at the end will you read this the right way, mute words she will convey
she communicates disregarding class and culture, thoughts boiling into tests
like the lips of Judas revealed Christ, weak judgment blossoms the blessed
& to know someone so sensational can be aware with ears overtly immature
she’s lured by lifelines in palms of this sincere companion, it’s quite secure...
...submitting her pure comprehension of verbs, subjects, n subordinate clauses
common people only imitate, replace the translation using periods for pauses
but we fall into complex traps, willing to convert back to her we attempting to fly
we pivot back to what’s known, being ignorant we go on and on like clocks time
our hands switch position like gestures, for one to understand we’ll exaggerate it
Every word is in the eye of the beholder, writing insults her…Ms. Sign Language


Good Luck, Tweety.
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Dervla 07-19-05 12:07 PM



1st character

He sits by him, feeling nervous, sweats pouring down hectic
Plane takes off, force winds making his ear, hearing static
He can only feel his heart beat pounding out of his chest
Like without any holes in a box, he quickly holds his breath
Like an road that's bumpy, the plane starts getting shaky
Fear screams pouring out of passengers vocals, so screechy
Body in a downward position, he whimpers as his body throb
Holding onto his friend hand looking into his eyes sighting his sob
Below of him, it starting to get wet, it's not the fear he pee in his pants
It's the end of the roller-Coaster ride and we're sinking, where there’s no land

2nd character

The water so cold, he starts to Tremble, but with heavy fear
His Voice is Speechless dead corpse bodes lying everywhere
Except him and his friend, Life-Jacket on their bruise arms
Hid body Teeters, Lips quivers aint no way he can remain calm
Holding onto his friend hand, they finally emerge out of the graveyard
Sun Shining Above them, but it seems to him that keeping
.................................................. ................His head up is so hard
the EFFECT water slippery. The Cause losing grip onto his friend fingers
He Tries to race up to the surface but it was to late. Deep down he lingers
He sights his friend eyes in a desperate need, he gurgles trying to speak
As He goes down, he see's his words in a bubble, evaporates into air
.................................................. ..........................Out of the sea

1st Character

He stood across from her face, tears Heavily pouring down from her pupil
His heart melted out to her, seeing her tears, same as his friend like a sequel
When he saw him go down, it was like seeing a rose doing the opposite of bloom
Down, Down, he goes into a little seed, then death where there he'll rest
.................................................. ..............For eternity but his soul will resume
Now his tears Leak, Looking at his friend G/F stomach, a little baby is in there
But the creator of the baby, Is like an ghost, but his soul remain, is not here
Arms Wrap tightly around his friend G/F, Like an present giving his heart out to her
He feels the pain in her heart, that's broken into pieces thrown into vigor
It seems his eyes are incandescence, because their red, but it just the tears
Flashing back on that Tragic day as he saw his own friend go down
.................................................. .................Last Words he couldn’t hear

Dervla 07-19-05 12:11 PM

Vote up................................................ .

~Lady Fiya~ 07-19-05 12:27 PM

i forgot to put this (below) lol...

---The conflict in this topical is how people can Write and produce floating words (concrete)... vs. how people can use symbols to produce symmetrical floating words (abstract)---

Let's hope people can get it after they read it..
You had a nice topical by the way.. good luck, chica.

Dervla 07-19-05 12:32 PM

Booyago........................................... .....:)

Dervla 07-19-05 02:39 PM

Booyago................................Uppin...... .............

Dervla 07-20-05 11:04 AM

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~Lady Fiya~ 07-20-05 11:10 AM

goodness people don't vote for nothing LOL...... uppin'!

~Lady Fiya~ 07-20-05 01:03 PM

wooo hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooo

Dervla 07-20-05 04:42 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Lady Fiya~
wooo hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooo



:hump:............................................ ..................

~Lady Fiya~ 07-20-05 04:48 PM

^none of that, missy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dervla 07-21-05 09:40 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Lady Fiya~
^none of that, missy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Not just a little?......I mean Touchie touchie :)


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