~Conflict~ vs Mc Mystique
 

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Check in by: 07-14-05 at 10:44 PM

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Mc Mystique has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 10:16 PM.

~Conflict~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 10:18 PM.

Yo
Conflict is a whack wanna be solo rap artist…
You’ll be thrown out like a trashcan full of garbage…
Doesn’t he relizes he’s no MC…
You Better off tossing burgers at Mc’y D’s b….. ( mcdonalds )
I don’t know how you got down with the courts…( his crew )
What the fuck would they want a wack mc for?
Keep tryna be tupac Shakur… ( check avater )
You’ll get shot an kilt, “Conflicts” there will be no more…
With my verse,I’ll leave you freeze on stage like pure ice….
Spit one punch, you’ll get knocked out like mike tys…
You rep ya home town Brooklyn with a parenthase.. (Check profile)
You wouldn’t out rap me if I was high on henna C…
You wouldn’t land a punch if I stood still…
Ya lines need medacine cuz they literally I’ll….
Ima use my banks money to provide a casket for ya funeral…
Fuck killin you b, I just owned you…

Lyrically Defined.. you know who we r. holla at us..

R u raedy ta get ripped/cause on dis track is conflict/
U tryin ta beat me is like getting drugs off an adict/*
My lyrics r deranged/u sound like a foreign exchange/
They should name me mystique cause my lyrics always “change”/**
Wit a name like conflict u know u got trouble/
Cause ill leave dis kid lookin worse than rubble/
Ill discrase dis kid yellin to his moms “save me”/
Cause shreadin u is like “takin candy from a baby”/
Its time to perform/ and lyricly “transform”/***
Then hurle ur whack ass into the air like a “storm”/****

*drug adicts are hard to get off drugs
** in x men mystique transforms into other characters
*** once again mystique “transforms”
**** storm is in the movie x men

g/l lets bring these votes in....................

Voted For: Mc Mystique

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With my verse,I’ll leave you freeze on stage like pure ice….
Spit one punch, you’ll get knocked out like mike tys…
You rep ya home town Brooklyn with a parenthase.. (Check profile)
You wouldn’t out rap me if I was high on henna C…

i just enjoyed MC's verse more and i thought he came with facts wich i like

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uppin lets get these votes....... I ll vote on a battle of your choice honestly just drop an honest 1 b

This was feedback posted for ~Conflict~
 

Chekkkiin pollllllss...^^^^^^^^^^^^ ur wackkk u fuckin herb...

uppin 2... we need votes to close it off.... Much appreciated...

Voted For: ~Conflict~

R u ready ta get ripped/cause on dis track is conflict/
U tryin ta beat me is like getting drugs off an adict/*
-very good opening with very good use of words

Its time to perform/ and lyricly “transform”/***
Then hurle ur whack ass into the air like a “storm”/****-
amazing closure there....

good battle...but whack...

my overall vote goes to Conflict

wtf? Yo kid. you ok slik flo. that verse was wack b... get ya glasses checked homie......

Voted For: Mc Mystique

yo man, you actually took this battle with ease man, it flowed well, defientely, it woz structured perfectly. punches mostly hit quite hard, although u still need to work on them a bit, but yer MC M ur verse woz alrite

Conflict, ur verse woz alrite it woz just like kind of a real newb verse, there wasn't any real hard hittin punches or anythin, u need to work on that aswell. it woz structured ok though, and it flowed alrite

MC Mystique gets my vote, he took this by far

uppin biaaatches i need mo votes

Voted For: Mc Mystique

Definately way better than your other battles. Guess the advice helped out. First i'd like to say although your metaphors and comparisons were weak they still better. Oh and conflict, your first explination was gay as hell, that's so obvious, but i ain't tryin to start shit. Th whole X men team theme was kind of whack for conflict, which is another reason that MC came out better.