Life's Circles
 

http://www.soundclick.com/newmethed

replied to tito's and tha q true dope and pop lotty's where ya bars at

peep

up.............

thanks for the feed

Yeah this was a decent track...flows good, and everythin...overall good track.

Keep it up.

for some reason i dont think you listened to the track lol

You got an old school flow. Like 80s or 90s. Not bad though. Beat's cool and so is the concept. I like this. Keep it up :thumbup:™

thanks E....i will

that beat is so old... i used that over a year ago... cool wordplay on chorus... slippin through the cracks of a circle... not very comfortable soundin on the mike, sounds less like rap and more like your whiter than me... but ya work on soundin cooler and thats possible, no hatin... gotta go decent. pz

listenin..
beat is dope, heard it used before
flow is coo
delivery is coo, could be upped jus a bit more.. but i guess it can fit the topic
hook is nice
good track!

listenin to the shit make me nod my head, nice laid back shit. ya flow and lyrics straight for some reason ya voice is just funny to me lol, but overall this is some quality shit. The whole concept of the song is straight fa real. I like the chorus too.

RTF on a Million Eyes
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199779

alright ill hit up tha link in a few

sup fam
listening as i type:

intro is cool...beat is nice..u got a nice mellow laid back flow im feelin that on a common sense type sound n vibe..ima hit u up 4 that collab...lyrically this is decent nuttin special..ur flow is str8...nice track man..keep em comin:thumbup: RTF i got sum steez in here

wheres ya link man...lol and thanks for the feed