Thassarap vs Madik
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-17-05 at 03:59 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Thassarap has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-16-05 09:44 PM.

Madik has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 01:19 PM.

I'll have you lookin from under your cap like a bottle of sprite
digest my words cause it's the only way you swallow delight
i'm hear to teach you, so for today i'll use the board and chalk you up nice
only reason you'd make a tight cut, is if i brought a the knife
i'll twist these mic wires to a dna helix and show what you made of
you takin' rhymes, so how you gon' beat me with shit you didn't make up
cause i spit simplistic art, took away the beat when i ripped his heart
whent a capella and inflcited sparks so he'd light up when he's stripped apart
cause i'll only way you'd rip the sheets is if you shred the paper
since thasarap! it's over, you rubbin blood staines on rhymes...like a red easer

I don't care what you say, punk, you're nothin but talk
Yea you're soft, that's why you're named after ya cock*
And if you think you can fuck with me, don't even try it
Cause your hair ain't red, but my punches can dye it
But if you got that itch, and you need-to-see-a-fight
I gon knock back "bitch", it ain't gon "bia-bia"-right**
You can't win or "t.i." me, so just "be easy", man***
When you rap, you "freeze" up like "Young Jeezy", man****
And if rap skills were money, you'd have only made a quarter
You even practive falling off, that's why you're a skateboarder *****

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Explanations:
*ma-dick = my-dick
**bia-right = be all right
***t.i. = tie (t.i. made a song called "be easy")
****young jeezy sings in "icy" about being iced out (frozen)
*****in his profile, madik lists skateboarding as a hobby

Can we get some votes...

Voted For: Thassarap

I'll have you lookin from under your cap like a bottle of sprite
digest my words cause it's the only way you swallow delight
OK
i'm hear to teach you, so for today i'll use the board and chalk you up nice
only reason you'd make a tight cut, is if i brought a the knife
OK
i'll twist these mic wires to a dna helix and show what you made of
you takin' rhymes, so how you gon' beat me with shit you didn't make up
HAHA...OK
cause i spit simplistic art, took away the beat when i ripped his heart
whent a capella and inflcited sparks so he'd light up when he's stripped apart
HAHA
cause i'll only way you'd rip the sheets is if you shred the paper
since thasarap! it's over, you rubbin blood staines on rhymes...like a red easer
OK


BREAKDOWN-YOUR VERSE WASN'T BAD AT ALL...IT JUST LACKED HARD HITTIN PUNCHES AND PERSONALS...YOU MAYBE COULD HAVE TRIED TO PLAY ON HIS NAME A LIL BIT TO..BUT THAT IS ALL YOU NEED TO INCORPORATE INTO YOUR RHYME IS PUNCHES AND PERSONALS




I don't care what you say, punk, you're nothin but talk
Yea you're soft, that's why you're named after ya cock*
HAHA..OK
And if you think you can fuck with me, don't even try it
Cause your hair ain't red, but my punches can dye it
UM..OK
But if you got that itch, and you need-to-see-a-fight
I gon knock back "bitch", it ain't gon "bia-bia"-right**
OK
You can't win or "t.i." me, so just "be easy", man***
When you rap, you "freeze" up like "Young Jeezy", man
NICE****
And if rap skills were money, you'd have only made a quarter
You even practive falling off, that's why you're a skateboarder
HAHA...


BREAKDOWN-NICE VERSE...I DON'T THINK THAT YOU NEEDED TO EXPLAIN ANY OF YOUR LINES CUZ I GOT EM WITOUR THE EXPLANATIONS..AND WHAT WON IT FOR YOU WERE YOUR PUNCHES AND PLAY ON HIS NAME...GOOD VERSE


GOOD BATTLE...1

Voted For: Thassarap

Madik
Your verse was pretty good. Your opener was good and creative. Your opener was good but could of been worded a little bit better. Ya other bars were good and hard. They were also creative and unique. The only thing that was lackin was personals in it. What I mean is that your bars could of been used for anyone.

Thassarap
Your verse was pretty good as well. Ya opener was reall good and funny, good wordplay on his name. Your closer was decent, the 2nd line lacked in a hard punch. All your other bars were good and hard. This battle was pretty much dead even but I gave you the vote because you had more personals in your verse than Madik.


*No hate just honest opinion*
*Please return the favor on the link under my sig... or I'll have to remove my vote*

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This was feedback posted for Thassarap
 

over all it was an ok battle. i think madik lost this. i cant vote yet but i think madiks opponent came with ahrder lines. n personals. madik came with more multis n stuff but needed a lil more personals n metas. its all good tho 1

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Voted For: Madik

you had better structure and flows with a weak closing but thats alright u just need to elevate just a tiny bit....but your opening was tight........

Thassarap tried to achieve doin wordplay but dint actually achieve that goal....but your puches were hard but structure needed elevation.....so does your multis and shit......







MY OVERALL BOTE IS TO MaDiK

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