!Impact! vs Wes City
 

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Check in by: 07-16-05 at 09:52 PM

Must drop verse in 2000 minutes after check in.

Wes City has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-16-05 08:44 AM.

!Impact! has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-16-05 02:39 PM.

West city wants to test !impact!..thats a No/
Im a new boy but i heat up mics when i flow/

Spit chit for real,hit to kill/
It'll gets messy when i grip my steel/

I can see but lookin at yah chain its white/
So feel free to tuck it in at night/

Coz i might eat you i can make a meal of ice/
And if i eat yah it's enough to feed me twice/

It wont be nice to see to see me nice/
Coz when you see me they'll be atleast a knife/

Fuck by standers im leavin them gob smaked/
With there mouth so wide open there gobs crack/.

Think i fucked that one up!!!

You wont be famous ya style aint sound
The only thing makin an impact is ya face on the ground
You’re a faggot im surprised you even have a dick
Impact!! ducks more than kid hockey flicks
I don’t smoke weed but the L you will taste
Watchin the breast stroke is your idea of 2nd base
What are you in 3rd grade time for show and tell
As a optamistic demon ya don't have a hope in hell
You aint from India but ill put red dots on ya head
shit…this a roll over dog, so sit still an play dead
Makin an impact on an internet rap site ya wack kid
you winning?
Its outta the question an you aint got the balls to ask it

uppin......for votes....yea im dope.........like soap...

get up.............................................

This was feedback posted for Wes City
 

dope shit right here ya heard me

Voted For: Wes City

alright u both were pretty wack and need elevation punches u both need to work on vocab u both need to work on personals work on it u booth were glorifyin urself thats what the open mic forum is for lol
but im giving it to u because ur structure was better both elevate

lol thanks for voting but you dont know shit ^^^^^^^

Voted For: Wes City

WEs
not a strong battle here..... by god.... cmon mate.... Impact..u suck balzz.... haha

Aiight Impact!! ducks more than kid hockey flicks
I don’t smoke weed but the L you will taste
Watchin the breast stroke is your idea of 2nd base
^^^^
decent punches...not good nuff... but nuff 2 own this herb.....
u had good vocab.. and good ...... sturcutre...... flow was decent... o/v -Wes city

return the favour in my battle against.... Young dollar below

Voted For: Wes City

West city wants to test !impact!..thats a No/
Im a new boy but i heat up mics when i flow/
EHH
Spit chit for real,hit to kill/
It'll gets messy when i grip my steel/
EHH...GUNPLAY
I can see but lookin at yah chain its white/
So feel free to tuck it in at night/
WHAT DA HELL
Coz i might eat you i can make a meal of ice/
And if i eat yah it's enough to feed me twice/
NAW
It wont be nice to see to see me nice/
Coz when you see me they'll be atleast a knife/
EHH
Fuck by standers im leavin them gob smaked/
With there mouth so wide open there gobs crack/
NAW


BREAKDOWN-YOU CAN SEE THAT YOU ARE A NEWBIE AT BATTLIN..VERSE WASN'T BAD BUT YOU GOTTA GET RIGHT WIT THE FLOW...AND YOU ALSO HAVE TO PUT IN A LIL MORE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES...WITHOUT THOSE IT ISN'T REALLY A BATTLE....AND YOU ALSO NEED TO UP YOUR VOCAB AND COMPLEXITY LEVEL...




You wont be famous ya style aint sound
The only thing makin an impact is ya face on the ground
OK PLAY ON HIS NAME...
You’re a faggot im surprised you even have a dick
Impact!! ducks more than kid hockey flicks
HAHA NICE
I don’t smoke weed but the L you will taste
Watchin the breast stroke is your idea of 2nd base
HAHA
What are you in 3rd grade time for show and tell
As a optamistic demon ya don't have a hope in hell
NICE
You aint from India but ill put red dots on ya head
shit…this a roll over dog, so sit still an play dead
EHH...SLIPPIN
Makin an impact on an internet rap site ya wack kid
you winning?
Its outta the question an you aint got the balls to ask it
EHH


BREAKDOWN-VERSE STARTED OFF REAL NICE...HAD A COUPLE PUNCHES THROWN AND LANDED RIGHT ON HIS CHIN....HAD THAT ONE PERSONAL PLAY ON HIS NAME...NICE BATTLE VERSE BUT YOU KIND OF FELL OFF AT THE END OF YOUR VERSE....BUT THIS WAS KINDA OF ONE SIDED

uppin............
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Voted For: Wes City

yo man, you took this i rekon. impact had an alrite verse it just didnt really have any proper punches in it, and when he did try and use a punch it woz extremely played. you both had a pretty good flow, apart from impacts verse went off in a couple of places.
wes citys got my vote