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Daubs Vs Pen N' Paper: Gore
Both just kyed it up while talking on msn... Daubs: ..Take ya paper and slit your wrists to watch you bleed in pain.. ..Shove your pen through ya oesaphagus so you can never breathe again.. ..Shove it down your throat and then watch this bitch piss ink.. ..Melt two bizcuit's in your eyes so your officially limp.. ..Il pick your arteries with a needle so you dont die in vein.. ..Shove my fist through ya skull leave you dumb and pull out ya brain.. Pen N' Paper: ill rip out ur esophagus/ son u done quick i kno u had none of this/ rip out ur adams apple and turn it to apple sauce/ make u eat it like Mopps.... kid im the boss/ respect how it is straight break ur spine/ u wastin my time/ so ill just quick kill u slice the pieces/ so bitch just die and be deceases/ slice off the legs and arm/that aint even half the harm/ blood goin up to the ceiling like freddy/ and dubs i kno u aint ready/ Just pissing about... :thumbup: |
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yea mad dope.......lets get some feed and plz tell us who was better.....
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This was aiite, something I havent seen before, Daubs won easily IMO
Take ya paper and slit your wrists to watch you bleed in pain.. ..Shove your pen through ya oesaphagus so you can never breathe again.. Wasnt the best of reads but decent RTF to my OM "I aint fuckin wit cha" feat. Tony Green and dont hate because Im from RAW i honestly gave my feed here |
Word, il hit it up...
And we literally did this in less than 5 mins. |
duabs took that no doubt.. i liked this line
..Il pick your arteries with a needle so you dont die in vein.. ..Shove my fist through ya skull leave you dumb and pull out ya brain.. |
lol, wtf? haha, not bad....daubs was better though, pen's lines were too short....but interesting fa-sho
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What kinda OM is this but ..yeah daubs took this ...Pen your lines were too short and simple ... Daubs were okay...acouple good punchlines..Keep it up
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LOL, we did it for a doss just said go at your opponent with gore and this was the result, and i figured id post it here for a laugh.
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i second that ^ |
Read my post above :rolleyes:
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yeah it was very simple but later on daubs... when one of my battles get closed will really have a battle like this bout extreme hardcore aight......lol
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Yeah man.......
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That adom apple/applew sauce line by Pen&Paper was Nice.
As a whole ....neither verses were hot.But it was keyed....so I'll let you off..... |
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