My Only Lifeline
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/vog_music.htm

song is called My Only Lifeline



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200363

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199835

yo yo yo come on people what do you think of the song be honest

Flow is good...raise your vocal levels...lyrics are ok..presence and delviery sucked because your shit is too damn low.....and beat is nice

thanks for the feed............................

i like the beat and the producers who made it...but, u shudda cut off their INTRO

and wassup with ur voice/flow?...sounds like ur mumbling

RAP man...RAP


no energy in this at all


eeeh...work on flow and delivery



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were u find dis beat??? beats sick as fuck... first.... no emotion u sound scared of da mic flow is decent.... lyrics i cant pick out cos ur mumblin ye seriously u need to feel wat u say not just say it.. if u cant feel it nobody else will feel it

thanks for the feed....................

this song was alright

listening.................

first impression...vocals to low..the beats drowning out your delivery.

hooks nice.

second verse is the same as first...vocal lower than the beat, You sound shy on this track..like your holding back.

I like your topic....

return some feed..link in sig.

nice beat to rap on need better quality and speak louder then the beat but i like the idea

Flow sounds ok for most part but still needs some direction u do sound like u mumbling beat is str8

this was ok, you gotta up your vocals a bit. your lyrics sorta fell in a few places.

listening as i type:

beat is illl.... wow... theres no emotion what so ever.. that needs to be worked on. flow is good but your mumbling. work on your emotion and delivery. coz i think its boring and people will turn it off before they hear the rest of your verse

hook is ight but no emotion and got no effect so people might not fink its a hook..


second dude same no emotion flow is ight though cant hear the lyrics.. raise the vocals.

pz

flow is iight needs work, needs a lot more energy, lyrics is ok, anyways you need to elavate 6/10

return favor though
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203350