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Kordozar vs Daubs
Battle Rules:
6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 07-17-05 at 01:05 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. Win by forfeit |
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 12:36 PM.
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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 12:50 PM.
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Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore!
Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name |
This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do..
Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you.. Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me.. And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty.. Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause.. Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, < just a subjective clause.. Explinations if needed: Bar1 = Kord > Dork and simple wordplay. Bar2 = loyalty royalty, his user title. Bar3 = Jaguar is a car and cat> cars and paws/cause a pause. He joined in december. Everything else is too simple imo, dont get something PM me or dont vote I will rtf on honest explained votes. |
WTF it missed my last punch out?! .
Strobe will fix it, anyway GL. |
Voted For: Kordozar
This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do.. Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you.. HAHA.. Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me.. And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty.. OK Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause.. Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, UM..OK I GUESS BREAKDOWN-VERSE WAS OK...DIDN'T REALLY STRIKE ME AT ALL EXCEPT FOR YOUR OPENER WHICH WAS PRETTY NICE...I DON'T KNOW WHERE THE RHYME IS IN YOUR CLOSER AND I READ THE BITCH LIKE 30 TIMES... Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore! Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court HAHA..NICE Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return HAHA Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name OK BREAKDOWN-YOUR VERSE WAS PRETTY GOOD...HAD SOME PUNCHES IN THERE WITH A PERSONAL ON HIS NAME...PRETTY NICE Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Iight Good Lookin I'll Return The Favor....
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
polls............................................. ...
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Kind Of Shit Is That? Uppin For Votes...
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Voted For: Kordozar
Pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to kordozar Daubs This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do.. Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you.. Decent opener Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me.. And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty.. naw Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause.. Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, < just a subjective clause.. Naw Kordozar Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore! Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court Decent Opener Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return naw Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name nice Overall vote : Kordozar..for having better punchlines..and a couple of good nameplays Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Daubs
check in the pollz................................
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Voted For: Daubs
u had good openin but a bit of a weak closing....nice wordplay...(kord) to (dork)...lmao....good multis and punches with good confidence.... the first bar of dork....weak but good rhyming... 2nd... " " 3rd... " " Overall vote Daubs Nice rhyming skills dorkozar Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Daubs
checkin pollss.... you got this man.......................
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^^^ Lol But Anyways Upping For More Honest Votes.
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