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TitoBronsky 07-17-05 07:33 PM

Ghetto Hobbies ( Tha q, Tony Self and Tito Bronsky)
 
Ghetto Hobbies


i responded on the following

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199935


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199444


ez

G Deuce 07-17-05 07:53 PM

I like this track.....

1st - Really good flow and quality. On this track, you had a young "Biggie" sense to your voice, And the "romance all the blocks" was a line that stuck wit me...

2nd - Tony, flow was good as well, but the echo on your voice was a little annoying and threw the transition of the song off when it came to your verse, but it was still a well written drop

3rd - Tito, quality wasnt very good. There were many parts that seemed that you was moving away from the mic, and the volume seemed lower then the others...However, your spit was good as well, the eye for an eye line was creative.....

Overall -

8.2/10 - would have been higher if quality was consistent

Enygma 07-17-05 08:02 PM

Listening*

Tha Q comes in dope. Flow is tight. I swear you sound like Biggie.

Tony - Shit flowed nice. You sound a lot like Tuna Fish from J Five.....not sure if you know who that is, but I like him, so it's a compliment.

Tito - Your vocals needed to be raised a little, but the flow was there.

Everyone was nice on this one, but Tha Q has been shining lately.........I'm scared to finish my track with him :(

Tha Q. 07-18-05 05:43 AM

well thank you...i love this track

TOny and TIto...yall niggas man


we in dis bitch

congrats


good shit


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TitoBronsky 07-18-05 08:08 PM

yea yo.......... i messed around wit my vocals too much........next time i'll let them blow
every bodys speakers..............


lol


nice drop yall..........

"ez"

BigTony.Self 07-18-05 11:43 PM

no doubt kids nice drops all round titio i dont think ya vocalz is off by more than a notch iz all gud

TitoBronsky 07-19-05 12:21 PM

rise damn it....................

more feed yall.......


'ez'

G Deuce 07-19-05 12:22 PM

ya, I'm uppin feedback for my boi...................................Up dis shit

.Ike. 07-19-05 12:31 PM

listening...

1st...comes in real nice...with a good ass delivery...and good flow...
lyrically u killin it man...good shit

2nd dude...comes in nice...delivery is nice....lyrically...u usin some nice vocab....im feelin this verse...nice....good work....

LOL @ the hook...i like it....originality here....i like the lil skits...

3rd dude...sometimes the volume on your vocals goes down a lil...which takes away from the verse....vocab is nice...delivery is good....flow is decent....just fix that volume shit and youll be straight...

make it fade out at the end or something...the way it just cuts off...kinda sucks lol...

but anyways....good shit...overall good track right here...equal performances by everyone..nobody really outshined anyone...good song...

PLEASE RTF with feedback on my new song "The Perfect Woman"...thanks

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200738

Tha Q. 07-19-05 01:43 PM

appreciate the feed


TOny , Tito, Q

shud start a clique

chea

J.D 07-19-05 02:09 PM

yo man, this woz straight tite. i know thats wot i always say about OM's & songs etc but this woz really hot, gud quality aswell, which you don't see too often with songs lol.
i woz feelin the 1st verse the most i think, but you all came hard on this track in my opinion. enygma woz rite you do sound like chali 2na from J 5 lol. nice piece 9/10

J.D 07-19-05 02:09 PM

yo man, this woz straight tite. i know thats wot i always say about OM's & songs etc but this woz really hot, gud quality aswell, which you don't see too often with songs lol.
i woz feelin the 1st verse the most i think, but you all came hard on this track in my opinion. tony, enygma woz rite you do sound like chali 2na from J 5 lol. nice piece 9/10

J.D 07-19-05 02:10 PM

woah shit posted it twice lol. sorry

Acuity 07-19-05 02:32 PM

beat sample is dope in beginning thug one

1st MC --> is riding this beat niiiiccee, his flow is killing it, adlibs a lil loud, lyrics r good but still street edge to em,

Hook is that bernie mac?....its dope lmao...got me laughin

2nd MC- tony self - he fits ova this nice...he switches up his flow loadsa times, sounds raw, foetus line is cool

LMAO @ Friday sample.....YEAAAAAAA..."IMA GET YOU HIIGGH CRAIG"

3rd MC - tito up ya vocals homie...ur rhymescheme is real nice, nice flow

nice track, quality cud b upped all round....keep em comin :thumbup:

∆ P E X X 07-20-05 12:11 AM

Tagged beat.


First verse, has a biggie-esque tone to it and flow. Qual was on point. Lyrics were typical braggo.


Second vrse - sounds liek an english Nos as far as the voice goes. Lyrics were okay. Nothing that stood out. Typical braggo.


Nice presence - jsut gotta keep your distance fomr the mic consistant cuz your vol goes up and down. This verse stood out the most by far since it varied it's flow and actually said things I wass listenign to liek "Where's this going" since the lines 'developed' as they went on.


Think you guys coulda def done more with the samples. Didn't acknowledge em at all. Third verse had the most presence and sound liek it was written specifically for the track where the other two sounded canned. I pesonalyl didn't liek the beat, but def more coulda been done with it.

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