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LW Title - Ambient vs. TrooP
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Rematch....Gluck Fucker..... |
word yo .
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troop,
ive seen enough herbs like u here. infact theres plenty like a needle in a haystack......troops one prick too many u'll never win the title yo. your just way to soft coz raps a gift, that u've never been able to get the paper off foolish and stupid, yo under the heat this fag'll mealt & if the worst comes to the worst, its coz ya battled yaself ur hopeless not got a clue. u think ur on par with me? son, i beg to differ & you just be straight beggin on the streets i leave kids depressed. my words are hurtfull, fa real i'll leave your self esteem low enough... to match ya skill |
*Walks 2 Ring.....Throws on Gloves....* Ok Look Your No Comp 2 Me like a Batch of the Next Rooks Last time u Threw Hard Lines you Were Tossing Away..... Princeton Text Books Ya Bound 2 Lose this..So Theres no Need 2 Plead Its Hard 4 Ambient 2 Grasp a Gift Kinda Like Three Fingered Kids on ChRisTMas Eve Believe me Ya Rhymes Dont Shine.They Lack Luster to T and Rv Looks like Hellen Keller Created ya Wack Structure Its Simple Kid So Pay Attention.... and Please Listen Am thinks hes Pimpin Last time u Dropped a Dime.........You were Snitchin When You Were Respected?...Shit Nobody Knows And His Avy Told Us that Everything About Ambient... "Blows" ....*eAzy... Hellen Keller is A Death and Blind Lady... |
just because u say "Deaf" wen u mean to say "Death" doesnt mean u need to switch around wen u want to say the other word..... sheesh....
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U kno wha the hell i meant
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How ya not gone vote on a title bout.............................
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Thats fucked up..damn near sunday and no votes
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ive seen enough herbs like u here. infact theres plenty
like a needle in a haystack......troops one prick too many ur hopeless not got a clue. u think ur on par with me? son, i beg to differ & you just be straight beggin on the streets VS. Your No Comp 2 Me like a Batch of the Next Rooks Last time u Threw Hard Lines you Were Tossing Away..... Princeton Text Books Its Simple Kid So Pay Attention.... and Please Listen Am thinks hes Pimpin Last time u Dropped a Dime.........You were Snitchin When You Were Respected?...Shit Nobody Knows And His Avy Told Us that Everything About Ambient... "Blows" ....that is my opinion. Ambient had two real dope bars, but to me the rest of his verse just seemed like old ass concepts with a new spin on them, also the delivery was real basic and lacked originality, troop came good this time unlike the hoe shit from the last battle, had a few nice bars and the rest of the verse was just ass, especially that christmas bar with the gifts n shit, son that was wack as hell and you shud've left that out..........but overall troop had more bars that made me laugh and think "hey, that was funny, a dope bar" so...... V/ - TROOP |
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its a close ass battle....... thats y there are no votes.... ive been here three times and cant decide
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cool ass battle
thrown off at first by troops struc, but i read it again n really started feelin it... good overall verse wit some cool punches...didnt like tha delivery on tha closer tho but it was a good personal...good shit kid... ambient had more general punches n no real personals but kept it on some funny shit... all punches were hittin n tha worse comes to worse line had me rollin...tha 2nd and 4th bar were soso but the rest had me rollin...closer was hurtfull...great consistency. good battle guys...cool read v/ ambient |
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