yeah
 

picture this another homie out drinkin sit there thinkin
how this man could be dissin everything he has his life and his pad
just knowin any second hes about to snap
next thing you know somethin bads happend
im on top off this mother fucker smashin and letin him have it
i through a couple more and as my word is my balls
his bitch she had more than her husband at all
next thing you know i got this bitch fuckin screamin
kickin and swingin like a posed demon
but as a true player i had to give her an open five
and she watched me smash that guy
know shes all cryin like look what you done
fuck wernt my falt he should learn how to run
or not pop off at the mouth and not get caught out
cause i treat every fight like a title bout

any thing.............................

its cool but it sounbd like you got a lil off subject
nice rhyme scheme though

6.5/10=truth
kepp workin
nuthins eazy