~*Come Back*~ First R&B song
 

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{Verse 1}
Universal emotion called love bonded us spiritually
Losing your love was not a rewarding experience
Doubt and hurting on my face wasn’t mysterious
Got take it serious because there is no other way
Can’t live another day without you in my arms

{Door to Chorus}
Another night goes by without you by my side
You’re dressed in all of me usually but now I cry
It’s hurting so badly not even hanging by a thread
Hurting cuz I got to live with our love being dead

{Chorus}
I can’t go back to you as long as god is saying no
I never wanted to leave but my conscience says go
Through out my days you and me I thought of that
Dreaming thinking and wishing you would come back

{Verse 2}
Falling in love losing you is like losing your life
I seen my wife leave slowly now you left me so lonely
Pure love is what you showed me but why is it gone
We could have live together and even had a son
I can’t understand why you wouldn’t want that with ya

{Door To Chorus}
I can’t go another night without you by my side
You’re dressed in all of me usually but now I cry
It’s hurting so badly not even hanging by a thread
Hurting cuz I got to live with our love being dead

{Chorus}
I can’t go back to you as long as god is saying no
I never wanted to leave but my conscience says go
Through out my days you and me I thought of that
Dreaming thinking and wishing you would come back

Now Uppin. I want feed. I'll RTF.....

yay. thanx.. now I want more. :)

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It was aiight,sorta gets corny at times...
But it was nice how you played out tha darker side of romance!

i like this line"Falling in love losing you is like losing your life
I seen my wife leave slowly now you left me so lonely

are you talkin bout your future wife walkin out tha door or just ur wife 4real.
either way I like that...

I give you 8.3/10...because I would like ta here how tha notes where dropped!

:thumbup:

heh. naw future wife. but uppin.

all this stuff is played just bits and pieces from other songs come on bring something new to the table are you able to do that like you sid about script this uck because its not original (NOW TELL ME WHY MY POEM SUCKS)

keep out my dope threa an go back to your wack threads. :D

It was hot if you ever wanna do a remix to this hit me up but yo this was great I liked the emotion how you sort of like said the words you were sayin to her it was like I was thier this overall gets a 8.5/10!

heh. I guess. uppin..

Nice drop manye.....had a good concept...had some nice chorus to go along with it all...rhymes were good...overall-8.5/10....Pure dope i thought...keep up the good work manye....

why thank you.. now I want more.

uppin this shit,.,.

good drop man, emotion and imagery were very good, vocab was good, was really feelin the first verse and hook, keep it up man..........


.........links in sig, again good job

nice. thanx. hey view my other one.