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Real Talk feat Lawd Have Mercy & 20 Grand (Exclusive...)
Yea we did this awhile ago. Just didnt post it cuz my azz was lazzy...lol Intro- Key and 20 1st-20 Grand 2nd- Lawd Have Mercy 3rd- Key Fizzle Fucka Soundclick...its all about Dmusic...haha http://keyrogue.dmusic.com/ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200277 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200370 |
Rise. U sleepers
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*listening*
ehh never liked this beat that much....its ok... twentys part....good flow...honestly i wasnt feelin the lyrics...at all...the delivery was coo...flow was coo...just wasnt feelin it lyrically... Lawds part....i was feelin this more lyrically....delivery was coo...sometimes it seemed like your words came together in the beginning....the last half was better...coo shit though...voice is coo DVs part....pretty good flow....your voice seems weird sometimes...but its coo...delivery is coo.....i was prolly feeling your part the best outta the 3.....i was mos def feeling the closing bars...good shit.... yo PLEASE RTF on my new song.... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...439#post2304439 |
20 got the sikkest voice and takes advantage of that, you could damn near say whatever and peoplewould still love it, ROFL...however your verse was aiight, could've been more fluid on the flow, paused a bit longer than you prolly should on some points but good ish...man I can't tell where 20 ends and LHM starts =/...
Key your verse was nyce man, flow was off at a point and you shouldn't have just stopped then said "ugh" in there lol... nyce track tho... |
LOOL^^^....crazy chick
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1st off, I wasn't gonna reply to this cuz I don't like 20 grand = bitch
but...I will cuz of my boy DV neway Quality sounds real crisp...and this beat is takin it back Sounds like 20 was swallowin his on tongue ugh next The beat was aiight 2nd cat...pretty decent...u all sound the same on this track for some reason...in terms of voice... 3rd cat...pretty decent flow...work on delivery with the voice...not bad though hook is messy 1 |
LOOL^^ Word
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peepin... into bleh cool i guess ... 20 grand part... alot of self glorification n no real flow structure... voice goes on n off to me, ill feel it for a second then its like blah... 2nd dude sounds ill as hell to me, flow is on point n delivery def shinin on this so far he is ill... dv now, sounds more like real talk lol.. touchin some good issues on this one... def elevated from last time i heard u... i think wen u get on some deeper topics you shine the best... yea dv shines on this.. plus lawd was pretty good 20 mite have brought it down a lil in my oppinion but its cool for what it is
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