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WiseWun vs Kordozar
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8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 07-19-05 at 12:47 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 12:05 PM.
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WiseWun has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 12:08 PM.
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Son..Your Lyrics are trash,and without a weapon you weak..
Wise'll will break "Kord/Chord In 2 Pieces" as if you ripped a "Tendon In Yah Knee!!"... Wise Migrated from Competitive Boards .. your from newbie ones and thats where your Lyrics are Brewed.. Death is What You'll Recieve..But Wise'll stab you with "screwdrivers on your way to heaven" jus to make sure your "Spirit is Screwed!!".. When Wise Writes .. You'll See mad complexity and a perfect paste of consistence.. Matter Of Fact , When I Murder You..ill Rip and "Untangle Your DNA Strands" so you'll die without a "Trace of Existence!!"... My intelligence is untouchable , and i write vocabulary but i still Blend it with a slang... im GOD .. remember who made you can kill you .. so Wise'll "Shove TnTs in Yah Head" and make a "BIG EXPLOSION" ...damm hows that to end it with a "BANG"... Explanations : First Bar - its a nameplay..check his name.. Second Bar - Think about it .. Picture it .. third bar - DNA = Who you Are ... think bout it Fourth Bar - BIG BANG EXPLOSION ... think bout it fammlayy... |
Ock You Still New, Fall Back.... Cause Your Not Even Worth It
I Would Of Called You Wack But Ya Lines.... Defeat The Purpose Easily Merkin You With Basic Wordplay You Suck Please Tell Him Punches Are So Off Seems Like Your In Comp With The Bug Repelant Your Far From The Future,Verse? Just Lose It And I'll Be Straight The Only Time Wise Was Hard........... Is When It Was Out Of Date Grab A Nicotene Because Your Rhymes Are Not Somethin You Smoke To Done!Now Watch This Kid Keep Quiet Without Me Stranglin His Vocals Off-Is Bug Repelant Wise Is A Brand Of Bread Scream At Me |
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Voted For: Kordozar
wisewun: Son..Your Lyrics are trash,and without a weapon you weak.. Wise'll will break "Kord/Chord In 2 Pieces" as if you ripped a "Tendon In Yah Knee!!"... ^^^^ALRITE I GET DA PUNCHLINE...BUT WEAPOND YOU WEAK AND TENDON IN YAH DONT RYHME AT ALL U FORCE DA SHIT OUT DAT Wise Migrated from Competitive Boards .. your from newbie ones and thats where your Lyrics are Brewed.. Death is What You'll Recieve..But Wise'll stab you with "screwdrivers on your way to heaven" jus to make sure your "Spirit is Screwed!!".. ^^^^^DIS WAS TERRIBLE...HOW MANY WORD U GON TRY DA FIT IN 1 BAR FAM U CANT EVEN FLOW DAT SHIT When Wise Writes .. You'll See mad complexity and a perfect paste of consistence.. Matter Of Fact , When I Murder You..ill Rip and "Untangle Your DNA Strands" so you'll die without a "Trace of Existence!!"... ^^^DID IT AGAIN.....2 FUCKIN LONG My intelligence is untouchable , and i write vocabulary but i still Blend it with a slang... im GOD .. remember who made you can kill you .. so Wise'll "Shove TnTs in Yah Head" and make a "BIG EXPLOSION" ...damm hows that to end it with a "BANG"... ^^SMH.....DONT RAP AGAIN UNTIL U LEARN HOW DA WRITE BARS CUZZ U'LL NEVA WIN A BATTLE AND DATZ REAL TALK kordozar: Ock You Still New, Fall Back.... Cause Your Not Even Worth It I Would Of Called You Wack But Ya Lines.... Defeat The Purpose ^^^SIMPLE....BUT I LIKE DIS RYHEM SCHEME WAS GOOD Easily Merkin You With Basic Wordplay You Suck Please Tell Him Punches Are So Off Seems Like Your In Comp With The Bug Repelant ^^^LOL...GOOD Your Far From The Future,Verse? Just Lose It And I'll Be Straight The Only Time Wise Was Hard........... Is When It Was Out Of Date ^^^NAHHHHH Grab A Nicotene Because Your Rhymes Are Not Somethin You Smoke To Done!Now Watch This Kid Keep Quiet Without Me Stranglin His Vocals ^^DECENT CLOSER.... KORDOZAR TAKES DIS EASILY.... RETURN DA FAVOR |
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Voted For: WiseWun
Ock You Still New, Fall Back.... Cause Your Not Even Worth It I Would Of Called You Wack But Ya Lines.... Defeat The Purpose ^^^this concept of "his lines dissin for you" is played Easily Merkin You With Basic Wordplay You Suck Please Tell Him Punches Are So Off Seems Like Your In Comp With The Bug Repelant ^^^set up was horrible and punch wasn't all that Your Far From The Future,Verse? Just Lose It And I'll Be Straight The Only Time Wise Was Hard........... Is When It Was Out Of Date ^^^blah.......ight...coulda been worded better Grab A Nicotene Because Your Rhymes Are Not Somethin You Smoke To Done!Now Watch This Kid Keep Quiet Without Me Stranglin His Vocals ^^^OK..........but didn't rhyme well WEll.......you need to work on gettin some better,fresh, concepts.Then find a way to word it nicer and set it up so it's hits well.I don't like your rhyme scheme too much.And you could use a couple of personals here and there. Son..Your Lyrics are trash,and without a weapon you weak.. Wise'll will break "Kord/Chord In 2 Pieces" as if you ripped a "Tendon In Yah Knee!!"... ^^^Ok nameplay...but set up bad Wise Migrated from Competitive Boards .. your from newbie ones and thats where your Lyrics are Brewed.. ^^tell me where it rhymes???? Death is What You'll Recieve..But Wise'll stab you with "screwdrivers on your way to heaven" jus to make sure your "Spirit is Screwed!!".. ^^^bah....ight I guess When Wise Writes .. You'll See mad complexity and a perfect paste of consistence.. Matter Of Fact , When I Murder You..ill Rip and "Untangle Your DNA Strands" so you'll die without a "Trace of Existence!!"... ^^^^OK....creative at least... My intelligence is untouchable , and i write vocabulary but i still Blend it with a slang... im GOD .. remember who made you can kill you .. so Wise'll "Shove TnTs in Yah Head" and make a "BIG EXPLOSION" ...damm hows that to end it with a "BANG ^^^^not that good and too long Ight you got this battle.But next time.Fix ya structure up.It was ugly.You may even lose this battle becuase of it.Cats will just take a look at the verses and drop a vote for the neat one the other guy had.Some of your lines didn't rhyme.But punches gave you this. Vote-Wis WUN VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR I WILL HAVE TO REMOVE THIS VOTE http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201803 |
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