un-fuck-widable vs Transkriptz
 

battle rulez

8 Barz
Crew Votes allowed we in same crew
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 ko
5 votes
3-0 tko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-22-05 at 02:15 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

un-fuck-widable has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 02:16 PM.

anyway...let me key this shit..
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Open file: prewriten spit.... replace opponent with my name/
Took you weeks to type that shit, this is a momentary flame//

But I doubt you always bit, though your style is bitten frequently/
Your Punches Never Hit, how can those lines ever be for me?//

dis is sick-shit , but not a Quick-Spit, this Misfit who Licks Dick Bit-This/
But got it twisted, his loss will be moving like Tectonic Plates Shifted//

Killin' you with Tight Types, you cant See Me like you blinded by a Bright Light/
But im Quite Nice like Iron Mic on Fight-Night, like 'Tyson' Den Might Bite//

Nice lines? You Lack Samples, Mine will leave your Back Mangled
Played punches... and your verses have More Proof than Jacc Daniels//(Liquor)

I slay the Hardest, Spray my Targets, everything you Portray is Garbage/
Play ya part kid, only time you have a Big Pun is listenin to ya Favorite Artist//

When im flippin the words'll be, makin ya Wet The Scene Up, cause you fuckin Drippin Nervously//
Thinkin ya spits is Hurtin Me, im rippin this Nerd With Ease, Den's weaker than Bitches In Surgery//

Nobodys PEEPING-HIS-SHIT, They Just SLEEP-ON-THIS-BITCH/
Your Raps Truly Awful And They KEEPING-A-GLITCH//

& Dont FEED-OFF-MY-VERSE Or You'll Be NEEDING-A-HEARSE/
One Of My Lines Is Better Than anything u spit cause Your LEADING-DISPERSE//

lol spit kid

its shit i know but hell this cud be an easy win for ya!!

Transkriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 02:29 PM.

un fuck wid fuckin with me not gonna happen
you are the one with brains i be bashin
I burst in to flames so that means im hotter
cause im a sold out nigga like harry potter
I be makin you take more drugs so u can over dose
you think you a vet just cause u over 100 posts
killin you verbally with word play ya lifes in danger
you like eminem that means you need to manage your anger (eminem's tour is called "Anger management")
dammit how many times do i really have to notice
im way ahead you keep in mind that im still the dopest
you with your lyrics nigga you aint a vet
you just a faggot with a dumbass accent
i got my, ak47 buretta plus my mac
let me lay down the law you cant spit and thats a fact
im layin you in the dead like i got graveyard shift
im faster than you so you can live up to the name "swift" (his screen name is swiftmc)

uppin.............................................

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

u had good flows kid dont get me wrong...but u came weak on the opning but the clsure was good

Open file: prewriten spit.... replace opponent with my name/
Took you weeks to type that shit, this is a momentary flame//
weak

& Dont FEED-OFF-MY-VERSE Or You'll Be NEEDING-A-HEARSE/
One Of My Lines Is Better Than anything u spit cause Your LEADING-DISPERSE//
again needs elevation






my overall vote goes to the fuck

un fuck widable

aight thanks for vote yall uppin...........................

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

Transkriptz:

un fuck wid fuckin with me not gonna happen
you are the one with brains i be bashin
^^no 2/10
I burst in to flames so that means im hotter
cause im a sold out nigga like harry potter
^^wtf 1/10
I be makin you take more drugs so u can over dose
you think you a vet just cause u over 100 posts
^^ehh 3/10
killin you verbally with word play ya lifes in danger
you like eminem that means you need to manage your anger
^^decent meta ok punch 6/10
dammit how many times do i really have to notice
im way ahead you keep in mind that im still the dopest
^^self glorification 2/10
you with your lyrics nigga you aint a vet
you just a faggot with a dumbass accent
^^no 0/10
i got my, ak47 buretta plus my mac
let me lay down the law you cant spit and thats a fact
^^no 2/10
im layin you in the dead like i got graveyard shift
im faster than you so you can live up to the name "swift"
^^no but decent personal 3/10

Overall: 19/80 (24%)


Un-Fuck-Widable:

Open file: prewriten spit.... replace opponent with my name/
Took you weeks to type that shit, this is a momentary flame//
^^ehh 2/10
But I doubt you always bit, though your style is bitten frequently/
Your Punches Never Hit, how can those lines ever be for me?//
^^ehh 2/10
dis is sick-shit , but not a Quick-Spit, this Misfit who Licks Dick Bit-This/
But got it twisted, his loss will be moving like Tectonic Plates Shifted//
^^dope multies good punch 7/10
Killin' you with Tight Types, you cant See Me like you blinded by a Bright Light/
But im Quite Nice like Iron Mic on Fight-Night, like 'Tyson' Den Might Bite//
^^multies are getting overused 5/10
Nice lines? You Lack Samples, Mine will leave your Back Mangled
Played punches... and your verses have More Proof than Jacc Daniels//
^^nice bar 6/10
I slay the Hardest, Spray my Targets, everything you Portray is Garbage/
Play ya part kid, only time you have a Big Pun is listenin to ya Favorite Artist//
^^seems familiar to me 6/10
When im flippin the words'll be, makin ya Wet The Scene Up, cause you fuckin Drippin Nervously//
Thinkin ya spits is Hurtin Me, im rippin this Nerd With Ease, Den's weaker than Bitches In Surgery//
^^stretched 4/10
Nobodys PEEPING-HIS-SHIT, They Just SLEEP-ON-THIS-BITCH/
Your Raps Truly Awful And They KEEPING-A-GLITCH//
^^ehh 4/10
& Dont FEED-OFF-MY-VERSE Or You'll Be NEEDING-A-HEARSE/
One Of My Lines Is Better Than anything u spit cause Your LEADING-DISPERSE//
^^good closer 6/10

Overall: 42/90 (47%)


Vote: Un-Fuck-Widable


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aight thanks for vote i wil return the favour in a sec upping!!!

i cant vote as opt1c is in ma crew sos mayne any uva?

upping............................................ ...........

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peepin polls.... good luck to both................

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